Home » Poems » Hgarvey Daniel Esquire » Snowflakes

Snowflakes

Winter's first snowflake
Gently falls upon my tongue
Nature melts with-in

Icicles forming
Growing swords to frozen mounds
Freeze pops of nature

natureseasonshaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Suzanne Delaney

April 7, 2013 at 11:33 PM

lovely images...like whiskers on kittens Love you and thinking of you.

Phyllis Babcock

April 5, 2013 at 3:14 PM

Nicely done on these two haikus. Well we had more snow today and this winter does not want to stop for us. The roads are in terrible shape and it is very slow to melt this year. I am ready for spring. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

March 25, 2013 at 3:26 PM

this is very clever imagery. Especially the second one, freeze pops of nature!! Loved seeing these, my friend. how is the cabin?

Raul Moreno

March 14, 2013 at 9:51 PM

A nice little gem you have here HG, nice to read some of your words. I hope you are doing great. God bless...

Debbie Duncan

January 18, 2013 at 10:44 AM

Love the haiku ;} you have a great day.

Lynette Chachere

December 9, 2012 at 3:31 PM

the beautiful arrival of winter.. even though it can get really cold, this season is still worth while. how are you, Harry? i hope your life is well. take care. ~Always&Forever Lynn