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Pretty Flower In the Deep Woods

VINEYARDS of HAPPINESS --------------------- GARDEN of SORROW There is no greater Happiness,-----------when-----------Pulling away sorrow then being in my lover's arms,-------letting go of----Broken memories Kissed by his hungry lips,-------------------------------Rejecting all hunger, of love spoiled by his sweetest charms.-----------------------The surface spoiled look in his face There is no greater Happiness,------------------------Holding the depth of solitary sorrow feeling my love's warm embrace,-----------------------Feelings of cold,no emotions on Gods grace Meeting in our secret GARDEN,-----------------------Prolonging the visit to our VINEYARD Opening dreams' golden gates.------------------------the door you open leads into dark woods There is no greater Happiness,-------------------------Reviving every motion of sorrow and there 'll never be ,for me,----------------------------trapped forever inside of me till that far promised day,------------------------------------Broken promises day by day My Honey love s' here with me.------------------------a wound so fresh, damaged like a twig HAPPINESS -------------------------to-------------------- SADNESS Happiness to me,is as easy as can be,----------------Sadness triumphs over anything in me a doughnut,a cup of English Tetley tea.------some nights----------A bucket of ice cream,a bottle of Jack Daniel Lying on my beige leather sofa,------------some days-------------Slouching up against the wall Covered by a Woolen red tartan rug,------------- tears fallen like a red river on the carpet Hugging and Kissing,Fondling and snogging,--- some mornings ---Crying and Weeping,Wiping the Sobbing Just watching T.V.------------------------------------------Just imaging you THE ROSE===============================WITHER Love is a Pink Rose,--------------------------------------------A rose in the dark woods with a crown of thick Grey thorns,--------------------------Like a cloud following you delicate and strong.-----------------------------------------------Tilting till its gone By ;Charma By : P.D. inspired By : Charmaine Chircop compose By : Poet Destroyer ~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2014 5:41:00 AM
Hi Linda. As usual, I enjoy your works to the deepest core of my soul...... Congrats for having your piece featured in PS's homepage! ^_^ <3
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Date: 10/5/2013 7:23:00 AM
a brilliant poem from a great poet. congratulations dear PD on your win. :) cheers! :)
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Date: 10/3/2013 7:38:00 AM
Hi my dearest sis! I want to go around the soup tonight but it's raining now here & my internet speed runs super slow so, i can't wait to come & congratulate u for another great win. I'll come back to read & congratulate the others soon. SO MY BIG HEARTY CONGRATS on your great win! Big hugs! This is a great collab poem w/ another great poet, our dear friend Char. Your creativity is so impressive making it unique & so fascinating! Thanks a lot! Good night my dearest sis! God bless! love m4evrLeo
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:45:00 PM
wow! what a super styled poem & win...luv ya sis............. ......... SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:20:00 PM
Spellbinding throughout! Really enjoyed you two...congratulations!
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:06:00 PM
I love the contrast between the happiness and the sadness in this poem. And, how they melt into each other, as one. I think I can really relate to this poem! Wonderful work, and a great collaboration! Congratulations on your win, as well, Linda!
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Date: 10/1/2013 2:58:00 PM
wow, how the heck did I ever not see THIS one?? Was it put up very recently? I see congratulations are in order!! I love how you complemented each other through contrasting images. A great read!!
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:18:00 AM
well, this is an impressive and strikingly different approach to the theme, pd, and I have to say I'm very surprised it didn't place much higher...to me, this contest has thrown up a few odd results, but that's just my personal opinion...top marks for originality and congrats (also to charma for the inspiration as she too is a very good writer) :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:50:00 PM
I love the way you penned this piece...very well crafted and beautiful...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 3:54:00 PM
Linda, yours was, without a doubt, the most unique entry and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for entering!
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Date: 9/30/2013 3:28:00 PM
congrats on your win Linda
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:27:00 PM
awesome YAHOOOOOO win... Thanks Caleb... MEMEME :-)
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Date: 9/30/2013 11:57:00 AM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Linda. - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:09:00 PM
Dear Linda, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. OHH how Unique. This is definitly a Favourite. I stand in Awe, reading this contrast of two of my Favourite POETESSES. You do know when this was written YOU only had 2500 characters. YOU now have 6000.You can move Face, the last word in YOUR first line across to be under YOUR POEM making Charmaine;s easier to read though I'm sure the Great POETS here read correctly. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/20/2012 3:21:00 PM
this is amazing, so amazing....
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Date: 6/1/2010 7:44:00 PM
this one goes to my faves! I really liked how you complemented (or should I say contrasted) Charma's writes--they're very cleverly done and I just felt myself being drawn into each of your writes--you sure have a great imagination, dear PD :) btw--love that term you used in your comments--"soul dropper"--wow--I hope my write didn't put you in too much of a sad mood though...
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Date: 5/17/2010 6:18:00 PM
Im speechless... i really loved ur write!
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:38:00 PM
Great write, very creative. Much enjoyed. !!;)
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:48:00 PM
thank you soo much for liking my poem "outcast" :) it really means a lot...your an amazing writer btw haha - Much love, SammaJamma <3
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Date: 5/16/2010 7:49:00 PM
Brilliant of piece of Poetry by both poets. It is wonderful as well as amazing with a unique beauty of its own kind. You have done a great job on this type of poetry. Creativeness of both the poets is visible in this beautiful Poem. I have placed part 7 and 8 of Patradoot. Love and best wishes....Ravindra.....Poet D & Charma C
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:12:00 PM
your work is like a journey with all the twists turns and surprises ... as usual. in your thought process, do the words follow the ideas or vice versa - either way, it flows, i like it, thank you, chuck
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Date: 5/16/2010 12:47:00 PM
Your Free Verse comparison is awesome PD. Keep the creations flowing. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/16/2010 4:14:00 AM
I do believe that Charma appreciates your write, P.D.!!! Really well written, enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for your comments. I sometimes listen to youtube's music videos when writing on my PC and there are very nice ones. "The Modern Jazz Quartet" got some nice pieces on it...Have a great Sunday...Gert
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Date: 5/15/2010 6:39:00 PM
thankxxx BBF ..sound advice on my blog from your comment... love ..laugh ...live.. and laptop...haha... your BBF "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:50:00 PM
very interesting juxtapositions !
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