Shadows Past

Shadows, crying from the walls of my room Tears of agony flow down the cheeks of the groom Shadows weave a web around the darkness of Death Voices of Hell screaming "Welcome" as I take my last Breath. Welcome to Your New Eternal Home This is all I can write right now Maybe Tomorrow I will write more LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/19/2021 11:12:00 PM

it's superb really; I like some metaphoric expressions

Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:51:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/7/2015 10:47:00 AM

Your words are simple yet so powerful. For your emotion and pain wrap themselves around each word and we are left tearful and sympathetic to your struggles. Emile. #7

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/15/2015 10:47:00 AM

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/23/2014 3:11:00 PM

So sad and it feels so real,the sorrow ,the pain..and I know it is real.May your heart feel comforted as emotions pour on the page.

Rebecca Larkin

Date: 9/6/2014 3:51:00 AM

My heart falters as I read your words you've delicately placed before you for all of us to see. This piece is haunting, dark, sad, but most of all- it's beautiful. The passion, and underlying sorrow full of wishful thinking, sends one into a heart wrenching frenzy. This definitely manages to pull the heart strings and rightfully so- it's imagery and words are simply breath taking. Always, ~Becca

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/5/2014 11:30:00 AM

Hang in there Mate,,,your words mean so much to many....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2014 6:08:00 PM

so sad! But a good take on that tragic kind of feeling. How are you doing, HG? I just noticed you at PD's poem, so I thought I would drop by and say hi.

Elaine George

Date: 6/27/2014 2:22:00 PM

My dear, dear friend, Please know how much you are loved by everyone here at the soup. My prayers are with you. Much love from your poetry friend, Elaine

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/18/2014 3:01:00 PM

This is amazing work! I hope you are doing well, and thank you so much for passing by and reading my poem. : ) Much love always, Laura