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Lamentation



    Oh, come now sweet rain
    And mingle with my last tear
    For I am tired
   The rose has dropped its petals
   There is nothing left but thorns


9/30/16

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2016

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  1. Date: 5/13/2017 3:22:00 PM

    Dear Barbara, I hope you are well? I am worried about you. Love, Connie
  1. Date: 11/20/2016 3:14:00 PM

    I'm not I'm not surprised to see this is a winner Barbara. It has metaphoric magic! I haven't seen you around much and I hope everything is fine . This little beauty is going into my Faves! Blessings, Connie 7 ; )
  1. Date: 10/2/2016 5:19:00 AM

    Congrats on your placement, Barbara. :)
  1. Date: 10/1/2016 11:46:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Barbara :)
  1. Date: 10/1/2016 7:03:00 PM

    this has to be one of the very best written ones I am seeing . Congrats, Barbara. I have always thought you did well with short forms like this.
  1. Date: 10/1/2016 4:06:00 PM

    Sad imagery in your Tanka 'lamentation', Barbara. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest.
  1. Date: 10/1/2016 3:24:00 PM

    Congratulations Barbara, very well done...
  1. Date: 10/1/2016 10:14:00 AM

    A sorrowful yet meaningful lament dear Barbara, congrats on your win x
  1. Date: 10/1/2016 5:44:00 AM

    Very nice tanka...
  1. Date: 10/1/2016 3:12:00 AM

    This one is really beautiful, Barbara:) well done:)
  1. Date: 9/30/2016 9:23:00 PM

    very vivid picture and simply loved it Barbara
  1. Date: 9/30/2016 6:43:00 PM

    Very nice - a great lament for the lamenting contest ... CayCay
  1. Date: 9/30/2016 4:30:00 PM

    A heart tugging Tanka...well done BG

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