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Arthur Vaso is a Canadian poet, born and raised in Montreal, Quebec. He has had his works published in local papers/magazines as well as on many Web sites. He has traveled extensively around the world, and writes about a wide variety of topics.
 


How to build a better world with MARGARET ATWOOD

Blog Posted:4/22/2017 10:32:00 PM

I will be posting a link to a video of which this poem is based, please have a look!

Atwoods Poetry

 

This is about what really works in the world, encouragement, positive re-enforcement, searching for solutions instead of seeking what’s wrong. Building, comforting, and bringing people together. That poetry inspires any part of this process, what a joy that is. Always look to those who build, create and till, you will find greatness and always such goodwill.

 

I know my poem is not good, but the idea that inspired it is my goal!
 

 

Poetic Rejoice

 

Musical notes become antidotes

Teachers become motivators of youthful hope

 

Symphonies become beacons from negative yoke

Musical notes dancing with poetic spoke

 

Wheels in the mind start yearning and turning

With praise and hope and endearments true

 

Reciting dreams and reciting creative desires

Making his peers expose their joyous tears

 

Running to better places

Knowing glory is in the effort of all smiling faces

 

Now hear is a young man, with goals afloat

Ignored those who tried to sink his boat

 

Glory sings when you see kindness ring

Not when you see little ones pretend a sting

 

His peers where drowned with happiness tears

Youth has its wisdom as teachers smiled in the rear

 

Triumph and victory all held dear

 

The boy was reciting a poem by Margaret Atwood a famous Canadian poet like me!

 

The Moment

The moment when, after many years
of hard work and a long voyage
you stand in the centre of your room,
house, half-acre, square mile, island, country,
knowing at last how you got there,
and say, I own this,

is the same moment when the trees unloose
their soft arms from around you,
the birds take back their language,
the cliffs fissure and collapse,
the air moves back from you like a wave
and you can't breathe.

No, they whisper. You own nothing.
You were a visitor, time after time
climbing the hill, planting the flag, proclaiming.
We never belonged to you.
You never found us.
It was always the other way round.

 

By Margret Atwood

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Date: 5/5/2017 10:01:00 AM
Margaret is a pure poet unlike those who rattle the can full of shekels claiming to be famous.
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Date: 4/23/2017 11:21:00 PM
Found this famous quote "No one chooses to be winner or loser, nor first or last, so who then would choose to be second? Other than the worm?"
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Date: 4/23/2017 6:17:00 PM
I'm laughing at the "famous Canadian" bit.... I'm ALMOST famous Arthur. You say you know the poem is not good. Famous and modest too? Seriously, your poem is as inspirational as was the courage shown in that clip. We were all moved at his efforts because speech is so vital a tool of communication. We willed him on. It's just so nice that one so gifted with words as you are would take the time to shine a spotlight on such a noble struggle. Thank you.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 10:24:00 PM
Its even nicer when people see the the goodness of those helping people in need!
Date: 4/23/2017 5:13:00 PM
I really liked this video, ARthur, In fact, I listened all the way to the end (not always usual for me). It brought a tear to my eye that he had such compassionate teachers and school mates!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 11:01:00 PM
Yes I was sure you would like this, with your teaching and all! Thank you!
Date: 4/23/2017 4:55:00 PM
Arthur, I was not familiar with Margret before this blog. I liked the poem of hers you included and now I am off to read more.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/24/2017 12:07:00 PM
It was funny when I first saw it, but typical for the personality.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 10:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Rob, in many ways, some do appreciate first! LOL
Date: 4/23/2017 4:06:00 PM
Arthur, oh what a touching video. It really touched the heart. And Margret's poem is so beautifully penned, thank you for sharing.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 11:00:00 PM
You have a huge and beautiful heart! Hugs!
Date: 4/23/2017 12:40:00 PM
Thanks Jan for the link thats amazing!!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2017 1:23:00 PM
My pleasure Arthur. When you showed me the link yesterday I was so emotional as it resonates so much with me with the kids I worked with and I did see the original programme. I thought I would try and find more info for you about 'what happened next' what an inspirational young man!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2017 8:35:00 AM
If that doesn't bring you to tears you don't have a heart...Simply beautiful...The spirit of man can be remarkable. We all have our own obsticles in life and with a little support we can possibly overcome them....Thank you Arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 11:13:00 PM
Tim you said that so well, and with great heart! God bless
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/23/2017 9:00:00 AM
Tim I've cried buckets over that video and a moving poem that Darren White wrote. As soon as I saw the clip I was in tears as I'd watched the original TV programme which was called 'Educating Essex' and having worked with students who had language difficulties it has a profound effect on me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/23/2017 8:13:00 AM
Love both the poems, Arthur:) great message in the second one, thank you for sharing this blog:)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 11:14:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and listen! :)
Date: 4/23/2017 5:16:00 AM
Great blog my friend and yes Atwood was a truly great poet! Point is the world beat us enough already, thus we should strive to be more generous, more kind and far more peaceful with others! I loved both poems my friend and I know this blog is a positive and educational message you share with us!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 11:12:00 PM
You are an example of that kindness! You are a true gentleman.
Date: 4/23/2017 2:46:00 AM
What an uplifting blog Arthur:-) I was again moved to tears by the clip (which I'd seen before) FYI it was from a TV prog called 'Educating Yorkshire'. I hope you find this link interesting http://www.radiotimes.com/news/2014-05-05/educating-yorkshire-what-happened-next-for-musharaf-and-mr-burton:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 10:26:00 PM
Thanks Jan, is easy to see who appreciates uplifting verses self serving! LOL
Date: 4/23/2017 12:00:00 AM
Hi Arthur , I enjoyed both poems . Because they were so positive, encouraging and uplifting. Thanks for sharing this blog:-) Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 10:59:00 PM
thank you, I loved your poem with the same message, makes me happy to see all the good here!!!
Date: 4/22/2017 11:49:00 PM
This poem is great, both yours and Atwoods, the reason you posted it is even better. Treating people in a positive way, instead of punishing them. Building them up instead of tearing them down. That message is so important. Thank you.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/23/2017 10:58:00 PM
Darren you are a bright light that shines! hugs!

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