The Invisible Poem

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The invisible poet the invisible, lacking humanity the invisible, mostly slaughtered the invisible child the invisible starvation the invisible food the invisible you I am ashamed by so much invisible surrounding me

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2025 6:31:00 AM

It is a sad situation on all sides. I feel for all humanity that are in war zones and those wars not of their making. I hope that peace can come, but we know that is not going to happen for any extended period of time. Thanks for sharing this creative one with us. Sara K

Aurore Severo

Date: 5/10/2025 12:56:00 AM

The silence on this is deafening.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/6/2025 12:06:00 PM

Arthur, it is shameful. Thank-you for trying.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/6/2025 11:28:00 AM

We are so surrounded by invisibility that we end by finding ourselves invisible! So bitter is the feeling of helplessness.. the feeling of having a voiceless voice.. being submerged by the deafening noise of chaos, cruelty and injustice.. You are a visible poet with a humane voice, Arthur.. God bless you. Best regards.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/6/2025 7:00:00 AM

I see you. I don’t look away either. xomo

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/6/2025 3:56:00 AM

Yes!!

Aurore Severo
Date: 5/10/2025 12:57:00 AM

A man with a good heart!