The Invisible Poem

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The invisible poet
the invisible, lacking humanity
the invisible, mostly slaughtered
the invisible child
the invisible starvation
the invisible food
the invisible you

I am ashamed
by so much invisible
surrounding me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/7/2025 6:31:00 AM
It is a sad situation on all sides. I feel for all humanity that are in war zones and those wars not of their making. I hope that peace can come, but we know that is not going to happen for any extended period of time. Thanks for sharing this creative one with us. Sara K
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Date: 5/10/2025 12:56:00 AM
The silence on this is deafening.
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Date: 5/6/2025 12:06:00 PM
Arthur, it is shameful. Thank-you for trying.
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Date: 5/6/2025 11:28:00 AM
We are so surrounded by invisibility that we end by finding ourselves invisible! So bitter is the feeling of helplessness.. the feeling of having a voiceless voice.. being submerged by the deafening noise of chaos, cruelty and injustice.. You are a visible poet with a humane voice, Arthur.. God bless you. Best regards.
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Date: 5/6/2025 7:00:00 AM
I see you. I don’t look away either. xomo
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Date: 5/6/2025 3:56:00 AM
Yes!!
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Aurore Severo
Date: 5/10/2025 12:57:00 AM
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