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The Invisible Poem

The invisible poet
the invisible, lacking humanity
the invisible, mostly slaughtered
the invisible child
the invisible starvation
the invisible food
the invisible you

I am ashamed
by so much invisible
surrounding me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 3:50 PM
Hello Arthur Vaso , i do not blame you. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2025 at 6:31 AM
It is a sad situation on all sides. I feel for all humanity that are in war zones and those wars not of their making. I hope that peace can come, but we know that is not going to happen for any extended period of time. Thanks for sharing this creative one with us. Sara K
Severo Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 12:56 AM
The silence on this is deafening.
Beaufort Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 12:06 PM
Arthur, it is shameful. Thank-you for trying.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 11:28 AM
We are so surrounded by invisibility that we end by finding ourselves invisible! So bitter is the feeling of helplessness.. the feeling of having a voiceless voice.. being submerged by the deafening noise of chaos, cruelty and injustice.. You are a visible poet with a humane voice, Arthur.. God bless you. Best regards.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 7:00 AM
I see you. I don’t look away either. xomo
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Yes!!
Severo Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 12:57 AM
A man with a good heart!
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