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Longing

Longing
Waiting, hoping
Heart slowly dying
Memories re-fuelling forgotten dreams
Yearning

Longing
Wistfully awaiting
Dreams to stir
Prayers to be answered
Caring



Penned 18 December 2014

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Natia Blaine Date: 1/26/2015 6:37:00 AM very beautiful !! xoxoxo Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/6/2015 12:29:00 AM Lovely, Seren...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/10/2015 8:13:00 AM Thank you Rhonda ....Seren

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/2/2015 11:15:00 PM Seren, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/3/2015 3:55:00 PM Thank you Linda .....Seren

Sandra Haight Date: 1/2/2015 2:36:00 PM Congratulations, Seren, for your win with your beautiful poem about longing. Best wishes for the new year. Sandra Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/3/2015 3:54:00 PM Thank you Sandra for your congratulations....Seren

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/2/2015 2:04:00 PM beautiful, seren. congrats for your win in this new year! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/2/2015 10:07:00 PM Thanks Andrea, ....Seren

Jan Allison Date: 1/2/2015 11:36:00 AM such a beautiful write Seren many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/2/2015 12:30:00 PM Hugs Jan thank you so much .....Seren

Paul Callus Date: 1/2/2015 8:23:00 AM Such a lovely cinquain, Seren! #7 You describe longing perfectly. Congratulations on your podium finish. I wish you all the best for 2015. // paul Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/2/2015 12:31:00 PM Hi Paul, thank you for your congrats, happy new year to you and yours .....Seren

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 1/2/2015 3:07:00 AM It is another winning year, congrats Seren ...huggs Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/2/2015 5:15:00 AM thank you so much for stopping by...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/1/2015 9:35:00 PM Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Seren Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/2/2015 5:13:00 AM Thanks Dr Ram for placing my poem ....Seren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/27/2014 2:00:00 PM This one now breaks my heart. I hope this wins number one. A Fav. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 12/27/2014 6:04:00 PM Maurice thanks so much the fav and comments .. .Seren

Arthur Vaso Date: 12/22/2014 10:06:00 PM I do believe Etienne discovered a star, so to speak, this is one of the best poems I have read! An A7 in my books. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 12/26/2014 3:46:00 PM thanks my friend ...Seren Arthur Vaso Date: 12/24/2014 2:04:00 PM I often just bookmark my favorite ones! I faved this one! there! Merry Christmas Seren Roberts Date: 12/24/2014 5:27:00 AM thank you for your lovely comment, I think its strange so many write glowing reports yet it hasn't been fav once, ahh well that's life...Seren

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/22/2014 7:44:00 PM I can see why you have received such glowing comments for this one. Bravo! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 12/22/2014 10:07:00 PM I agree 100% Richard Seren Roberts Date: 12/22/2014 8:04:00 PM Thank you Richard, the amount of people that have stopped to read it shocks me somewhat.....Seren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/18/2014 4:26:00 PM Gorgeous Seren! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 12/18/2014 4:30:00 PM Hi Maurice, thanks for the comment ...Seren

Etienne Lariviere Date: 12/18/2014 1:01:00 PM This is a very beautiful poem, tres fantastique!!!! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 12/18/2014 4:24:00 PM thank you...Seren