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Longing

Longing Waiting, hoping Heart slowly dying Memories re-fuelling forgotten dreams Yearning Longing Wistfully awaiting Dreams to stir Prayers to be answered Caring Penned 18 December 2014

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Date: 7/27/2015 12:38:00 AM
Beautiful.. I know this feeling!
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Date: 1/26/2015 6:37:00 AM
very beautiful !! xoxoxo
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:29:00 AM
Lovely, Seren...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/10/2015 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda ....Seren
Date: 1/2/2015 11:15:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations! :) A very deep "Longing, WIN." Always~ Linda
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/3/2015 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Linda .....Seren
Date: 1/2/2015 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Seren, for your win with your beautiful poem about longing. Best wishes for the new year. Sandra
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/3/2015 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for your congratulations....Seren
Date: 1/2/2015 2:04:00 PM
beautiful, seren. congrats for your win in this new year!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, ....Seren
Date: 1/2/2015 11:36:00 AM
such a beautiful write Seren many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 12:30:00 PM
Hugs Jan thank you so much .....Seren
Date: 1/2/2015 8:23:00 AM
Such a lovely cinquain, Seren! #7 You describe longing perfectly. Congratulations on your podium finish. I wish you all the best for 2015. // paul
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 12:31:00 PM
Hi Paul, thank you for your congrats, happy new year to you and yours .....Seren
Date: 1/2/2015 3:07:00 AM
It is another winning year, congrats Seren ...huggs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 5:15:00 AM
thank you so much for stopping by...Seren
Date: 1/2/2015 2:00:00 AM
Hi Seren.. Congrats on your wonderful 3rd place win!! I hope this coming year of 2015 is your very best ever!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Dave seasons greeting to you also....Seren
Date: 1/1/2015 9:35:00 PM
Wish you all the best of 2015. Congrats on your win in my contest, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/2/2015 5:13:00 AM
Thanks Dr Ram for placing my poem ....Seren
Date: 12/27/2014 2:00:00 PM
This one now breaks my heart. I hope this wins number one. A Fav.
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Date: 12/27/2014 6:04:00 PM
Maurice thanks so much the fav and comments .. .Seren
Date: 12/22/2014 10:06:00 PM
I do believe Etienne discovered a star, so to speak, this is one of the best poems I have read! An A7 in my books.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/26/2014 3:46:00 PM
thanks my friend ...Seren
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/24/2014 2:04:00 PM
I often just bookmark my favorite ones! I faved this one! there! Merry Christmas
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/24/2014 5:27:00 AM
thank you for your lovely comment, I think its strange so many write glowing reports yet it hasn't been fav once, ahh well that's life...Seren
Date: 12/22/2014 7:44:00 PM
I can see why you have received such glowing comments for this one. Bravo!
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/22/2014 10:07:00 PM
I agree 100% Richard
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/22/2014 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Richard, the amount of people that have stopped to read it shocks me somewhat.....Seren
Date: 12/19/2014 6:44:00 PM
I don't have the words.. To say how I feel.. And language won't do.. To describe what is real.. God give me a voice.. So that I can explain.. I need a song, with.. A compelling refrain.. Waiting.. For words that soar.. Longing.. For so much more.. Praying.. That God might see.. Needing.. You to be with me.. I need you.. I need you.. I need you.. Need you! 12-19-14
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Date: 12/18/2014 8:13:00 PM
No Words.......
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The LYRIC
Date: 12/19/2014 5:50:00 PM
Speechless.. As in took my breath away, green eyes!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2014 9:00:00 PM
hmmm, did it take your breath away or so bad your speechless lol.......Seren
Date: 12/18/2014 4:26:00 PM
Gorgeous Seren!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2014 4:30:00 PM
Hi Maurice, thanks for the comment ...Seren
Date: 12/18/2014 1:01:00 PM
This is a very beautiful poem, tres fantastique!!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2014 4:24:00 PM
thank you...Seren