Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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Poster from 1920

 

 

 

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Fat Mouse

Fat Mouse

He has scored three
me still none
He is fat
I, running out of cheese
a little critter he is
outsmarting my genius
this house
not big enough
for the both of us
the battle is on
the outcome
unknown

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Arthur Vaso January 12, 2025 at 9:04 PM Note: the images and poem have nothing to with each other really, only that I will not be silent!

David Crandall January 9, 2025 at 9:08 PM Sounds like an epic battle! I'm putting my money on the underdog (which it sounds like is you - lol) Arthur Vaso January 12, 2025 at 9:01 PM haha yes, I sure feel that way!

Sam Kauffman November 22, 2024 at 3:54 PM Enjoyed your "fat mouse" poem and your on-going battle! Reminds me the the "mouse king" from The Nutcracker! Onward and Upward soldier! Arthur Vaso January 12, 2025 at 9:03 PM so funny thanks Sam!

John Read October 22, 2024 at 8:34 AM My father was in Monty's eighth army in the second world war, he spent some time in Palestine, I wonder when the madness will end. Arthur Vaso January 12, 2025 at 9:02 PM We can only hope, I just want humanity on all sides to prevail! :)

Eileen Manassian October 22, 2024 at 3:50 AM Dear me... seems someone wants possession of the... house by hook or by crook. Interesting write, dear. Fat mouse has not weight to throw around... Arthur Vaso January 12, 2025 at 9:02 PM shhhhhhhh, I am happy the little one has outsmarted ,me!