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Fat Mouse He has scored three me still none He is fat I, running out of cheese a little critter he is outsmarting my genius this house not big enough for the both of us the battle is on the outcome unknown

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Date: 1/12/2025 9:04:00 PM
Note: the images and poem have nothing to with each other really, only that I will not be silent!
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Date: 1/9/2025 9:08:00 PM
Sounds like an epic battle! I'm putting my money on the underdog (which it sounds like is you - lol)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/12/2025 9:01:00 PM
haha yes, I sure feel that way!
Date: 11/22/2024 3:54:00 PM
Enjoyed your "fat mouse" poem and your on-going battle! Reminds me the the "mouse king" from The Nutcracker! Onward and Upward soldier!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/12/2025 9:03:00 PM
so funny thanks Sam!
Date: 10/22/2024 8:34:00 AM
My father was in Monty's eighth army in the second world war, he spent some time in Palestine, I wonder when the madness will end.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/12/2025 9:02:00 PM
We can only hope, I just want humanity on all sides to prevail! :)
Date: 10/22/2024 3:50:00 AM
Dear me... seems someone wants possession of the... house by hook or by crook. Interesting write, dear. Fat mouse has not weight to throw around...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/12/2025 9:02:00 PM
shhhhhhhh, I am happy the little one has outsmarted ,me!

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