Happy Mothers Day

I was often sad 
alone as a child
the stroller with no face
a forgotten object
an obligation
my father was no better
my mother is dead now
HAPPY MOTHERS DAY
finally

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Date: 6/14/2024 12:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your Mother's Day greeting through your unique poetic style. I'm a social worker taking care of abandoned, neglected, and orphaned children, so I can somehow relate to your muse... Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/10/2024 10:51:00 PM
Wow... I often wonder how some parents can Be so blind..?? I have seen some examples and Some to a large extent do not realise the effect They have on the children.. Yet we do have our Independance (so its not imoossible to get ) An equilibrum theres the pull of not wanting to Feel these thoughts.? Love yearns for reciprocation to a great extent..I leave it there May your day be well.'
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2024 12:28:00 AM
Thank you Joe!
Date: 5/6/2024 4:23:00 AM
simply heartbreaking on so many levels Art, hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/8/2024 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 5/5/2024 10:31:00 AM
Arthur, I often wonder why people have children when they don't really want them. The way you have addressed this seems to suggest you've made peace with all that came before. I truly hope that you have. From my own experience, I think we never truly escape from feelings in our upbringing, but we can behave in a way going forward that reflects how we would have liked to have been treated. That can do a lot. On a grander scale, we should behave as a country that improves on our past a la your America Never Learns poem.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/8/2024 9:48:00 AM
Very well said Duke! Thanks
Date: 5/5/2024 4:08:00 AM
There are as many bad mothers as there are good mothers but no one seems to understand. I'm with you on your poem. Thank you for this pertinent write.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/8/2024 9:48:00 AM
Very kind of you thank you, :)
Date: 5/4/2024 10:43:00 PM
Wow what a heart felt write many blessing.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/8/2024 9:47:00 AM
Thank you Yolanda.
Date: 5/4/2024 5:13:00 AM
How very sad Arthur! I hope this is fiction my friend?….Debx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2024 10:21:00 PM
Lets say is more therapy than fiction LOL, thank you for kind words.
Date: 5/4/2024 3:22:00 AM
Awwwwwww... this tugs at the heart. No one can replace a mother. I've been without mine for 24 years now. What a heartfelt write. I feel your pain
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2024 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Eileen.
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