Happy Mothers Day

I was often sad 
alone as a child
the stroller with no face
a forgotten object
an obligation
my father was no better
my mother is dead now
HAPPY MOTHERS DAY
finally
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 12:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your Mother's Day greeting through your unique poetic style. I'm a social worker taking care of abandoned, neglected, and orphaned children, so I can somehow relate to your muse... Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Maverick Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 10:51 PM
Wow... I often wonder how some parents can Be so blind..?? I have seen some examples and Some to a large extent do not realise the effect They have on the children.. Yet we do have our Independance (so its not imoossible to get ) An equilibrum theres the pull of not wanting to Feel these thoughts.? Love yearns for reciprocation to a great extent..I leave it there May your day be well.'
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 12:28 AM
Thank you Joe!
Allison Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 4:23 AM
simply heartbreaking on so many levels Art, hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Jan.
Beaufort Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Arthur, I often wonder why people have children when they don't really want them. The way you have addressed this seems to suggest you've made peace with all that came before. I truly hope that you have. From my own experience, I think we never truly escape from feelings in our upbringing, but we can behave in a way going forward that reflects how we would have liked to have been treated. That can do a lot. On a grander scale, we should behave as a country that improves on our past a la your America Never Learns poem.
Vaso Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 9:48 AM
Very well said Duke! Thanks
Greenhough Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 4:08 AM
There are as many bad mothers as there are good mothers but no one seems to understand. I'm with you on your poem. Thank you for this pertinent write.
Vaso Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 9:48 AM
Very kind of you thank you, :)
Nicholsen Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 10:43 PM
Wow what a heart felt write many blessing.
Vaso Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Thank you Yolanda.
M  Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 5:13 AM
How very sad Arthur! I hope this is fiction my friend?….Debx
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 10:21 PM
Lets say is more therapy than fiction LOL, thank you for kind words.
Manassian Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 3:22 AM
Awwwwwww... this tugs at the heart. No one can replace a mother. I've been without mine for 24 years now. What a heartfelt write. I feel your pain
Vaso Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 10:21 PM
Thank you Eileen.
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