Birthday Cake

The bakery was closed
family only an echo of long ago
no mementos of love
loneliness built
into my spinal chord
musical notes exposing
a weeping child
within an old man
a broken guitar sits on the floor

The grave yard across the street
beckons
the next day a friend
brings birthday candles
it took only one match
to burn down the rest of my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rose  Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 7:04 PM
wow this is so very sad
Roper Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 1:32 PM
Heartfelt poem, my friend. A birthday is to me a memorable time with joy. Not a time of sorrow and loneliness.
Bowring Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 11:11 AM
This is such a sad, sad poem Arthur but so beautifully written. You are such a talented, wonderful poet. Very touching, thought provoking with a very powerful end. I enjoyed reading your fine writing. Blessings to you.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Hello arthur, this is so sad. Enjoy your eveb=ning my friend. /Darlene\
Parker Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Too many end here… Seriously profound.
Baker Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 10:56 AM
WOW! Powerful poetry, Arthur. Your closing line was dynamic. Thanks for you visit to my poetry; I'm following your poetry now. Have a great week! Bill
M  Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Oh Arthur….what an incredibly moving and beautifully sad poem! Loved it! Debx
Poet Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Arthur, your words took me on a profound journey into the abyss of solitude and the inevitable passage of time. However, it is your final lines that truly encapsulate the essence of this experience.
Rose  Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 3:40 AM
wow this is so so powerful to read. It really packs a punch. I want to join you for a piece of cake, no candles, lol
Buhagiar Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 3:10 AM
Your imagination excels despite the sadness of this poem. Truly you are a great poet.
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 2:56 AM
I have a huge lump in my throat my friend, that final line and stanza sure packs a punch. I no longer do birthdays - the fire risk insurance of the candles is too much:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 1:41 AM
- What a heartbreaking poem, Arthur :( -
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 12:11 AM
wow Arthur strong but very sad it reaches deep inside your soul and rips a bit a way hugs Shadow
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