Birthday Cake

The bakery was closed
family only an echo of long ago
no mementos of love
loneliness built
into my spinal chord
musical notes exposing
a weeping child
within an old man
a broken guitar sits on the floor

The grave yard across the street
beckons
the next day a friend
brings birthday candles
it took only one match
to burn down the rest of my life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/21/2024 7:04:00 PM
wow this is so very sad
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Date: 9/30/2023 1:32:00 PM
Heartfelt poem, my friend. A birthday is to me a memorable time with joy. Not a time of sorrow and loneliness.
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Date: 9/27/2023 11:11:00 AM
This is such a sad, sad poem Arthur but so beautifully written. You are such a talented, wonderful poet. Very touching, thought provoking with a very powerful end. I enjoyed reading your fine writing. Blessings to you.
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Date: 9/26/2023 4:16:00 PM
Hello arthur, this is so sad. Enjoy your eveb=ning my friend. /Darlene\
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Date: 9/26/2023 10:58:00 AM
Too many end here… Seriously profound.
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Date: 9/26/2023 10:56:00 AM
WOW! Powerful poetry, Arthur. Your closing line was dynamic. Thanks for you visit to my poetry; I'm following your poetry now. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 9/26/2023 10:32:00 AM
Gorgeous writing brother.
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Date: 9/26/2023 8:07:00 AM
Oh Arthur….what an incredibly moving and beautifully sad poem! Loved it! Debx
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Date: 9/26/2023 5:54:00 AM
Arthur, your words took me on a profound journey into the abyss of solitude and the inevitable passage of time. However, it is your final lines that truly encapsulate the essence of this experience.
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Date: 9/26/2023 3:40:00 AM
wow this is so so powerful to read. It really packs a punch. I want to join you for a piece of cake, no candles, lol
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Date: 9/26/2023 3:10:00 AM
Your imagination excels despite the sadness of this poem. Truly you are a great poet.
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Date: 9/26/2023 2:56:00 AM
I have a huge lump in my throat my friend, that final line and stanza sure packs a punch. I no longer do birthdays - the fire risk insurance of the candles is too much:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/26/2023 1:41:00 AM
- What a heartbreaking poem, Arthur :( -
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Date: 9/26/2023 12:11:00 AM
wow Arthur strong but very sad it reaches deep inside your soul and rips a bit a way hugs Shadow
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