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November Dreams

We lie ‘neath the oak on a carpet of brown leaves that lost their amber glory. With eyes tightly shut, we envision spring’s return— hoping our love does the same.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 3/15/2019 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations for your win :)

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 3/17/2015 9:23:00 AM

Star "Elegant, i like Oaks, and always use them in my two or so poems well written poem, Carol Bryan Loves

Joseph May

Date: 10/12/2014 10:23:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Carolyn

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 8:52:00 AM

Sorry abt spellings of ur name Carolyn! My nasty system n slow speed of net is giving me trouble these days!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 8:49:00 AM

Wow CaroLynn such a sweet write full of true hope! Congrats on wonderful win my friend!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 6:32:00 AM

I love this write of loss and hope of rebirth. Congratulations on your win. I agree with Arthur and I too am going to fav this gem.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:30:00 AM

wonderful win Carolyn:-) many congrats hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 1:55:00 AM

Lovely message you conveyed so well, Carolyn, congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:29:00 AM

I love the romantic message in your sedoka, CArolyn. A very good use of this form! Congrats in my contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/7/2014 7:35:00 PM

wow!!!! love the use of seasons.. :D!!! making your poem in double toned!!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/7/2014 1:48:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic! This will make a lovely pastoral painting. Immensely enjoyed; a top rating for you, Carolyn. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/13/2014 5:43:00 PM

Back once more to re-read this captivating Sedoka and to shower you with congratulations on a lovely and deserved win. hugs // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/7/2014 4:55:00 AM

What a romantic Sedoka! It is so beautiful that one easily would celebrate with glittering diamonds in his eyes, dear Carolyne!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/6/2014 7:51:00 PM

This is a delightful Sedoka Carol. I truly loved it. The use of imagery in some lines is just awesome. I love it! You get a 7 at least from me, lol...wish I could rate you with more but can't. You know that. For sure is a fav and a gem for me now. If it's for a contest I wis you the best! Hugs! xxxx D.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/6/2014 6:21:00 PM

I can only give this a 7 here, but for me this is a 10, simply wonderful and added to my Favs!!!

Joseph May

Date: 10/6/2014 6:00:00 PM

Such a beautiful write Carolyn...Andrea will love this one....always good to see you...hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 10/6/2014 4:43:00 PM

love this sad but beautiful write, love. Loved your hoe-down

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/6/2014 4:01:00 PM

I enjoyed the image of this couple lying on the crunchy, dead leaves, hoping love would still be theirs in spring. You actually told a story in just six lines. Good luck in Andrea's contest!

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/6/2014 12:37:00 PM

to be at peace with love under the oaks, yet fear it may not last and die like the brown leaves....good luck in this contest

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2014 11:35:00 AM

Wonderful imagery with a promise of romance Carolyn:-) good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan