Villa Acambaro

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Acambaro is a small town in the middle of the drug cartels terroritory in Mexico, not a safe place to be.

My love, there was no greater
she held my heart in her hands
her first kiss
the arrow that pierced
if only she could know
I ceased to exist
when she let me go
a thousand love letters
before and after
meant nothing at all
she thought I was empty
depression hides your soul
she has her own wounds
happiness it seems
lives in the clouds
all my desires of long ago
buried in Acambaro

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Date: 4/21/2024 8:39:00 PM
The bittersweet lines of this tribute to a lost love, are very touching and elegantly written. Blessings.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2024 12:44:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn, :)
Date: 4/21/2024 9:43:00 AM
gosh you certainly choked me up with this one Art, hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2024 12:43:00 AM
oh no I will called the choker!!!! LOL
Date: 4/17/2024 1:50:00 PM
very powerful Arthur a beautiful tribute to a woman much loved by you. Hugs Shadow
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/15/2024 3:01:00 PM
Poignant, melancholy, pensive with sadness and longing woven into each line, Arthur. I do love the line "happiness it seems lives in the clouds." It really enco0mpasses that sense of loss. Blessings!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2024 12:42:00 AM
Thanks Sam, appreciate such kind words.
Date: 4/15/2024 8:26:00 AM
Love lost. Brilliant write.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2024 12:41:00 AM
From you Victor very kind words!
Date: 4/15/2024 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful lines to a lost love. SuZ
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2024 12:41:00 AM
Thank you, I cant believe I am so late to answer.
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