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Acambaro is a small town in the middle of the drug cartels terroritory in Mexico, not a safe place to be.

My love, there was no greater she held my heart in her hands her first kiss the arrow that pierced if only she could know I ceased to exist when she let me go a thousand love letters before and after meant nothing at all she thought I was empty depression hides your soul she has her own wounds happiness it seems lives in the clouds all my desires of long ago buried in Acambaro

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Date: 4/21/2024 8:39:00 PM
The bittersweet lines of this tribute to a lost love, are very touching and elegantly written. Blessings.
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Date: 4/21/2024 9:43:00 AM
gosh you certainly choked me up with this one Art, hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2024 1:50:00 PM
very powerful Arthur a beautiful tribute to a woman much loved by you. Hugs Shadow
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Date: 4/15/2024 5:57:00 PM
You’ve written of a lost love with such tender emotions. ‘Depression hides your soul’ is a great line, Art. It takes a toll in so many sad ways.
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Date: 4/15/2024 5:13:00 PM
such a personal write, thought provoking with poignancy and melancholy. I liked the impact of 'depression hides souls.' I agree...and it wreaks havoc on a relationship. Loved 'all my desires of long ago are buried in Acambaro." Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 4/15/2024 3:01:00 PM
Poignant, melancholy, pensive with sadness and longing woven into each line, Arthur. I do love the line "happiness it seems lives in the clouds." It really enco0mpasses that sense of loss. Blessings!
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Date: 4/15/2024 8:26:00 AM
Love lost. Brilliant write.
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Date: 4/15/2024 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful lines to a lost love. SuZ
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