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Christmas Lights

Burnt out bulbs dark windows a stillness I wait wait wait nothing moves nothing matters I live in dreams where he talks to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/15/2025 10:34:00 AM
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What a powerful write you have here. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed/fun day as you write away..................
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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/21/2025 3:25:00 PM
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I find this a write very open to interpretation Arthur.' I shall apply a positive one to it.' All the best.'
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Paige Hind
Date: 1/11/2025 3:47:00 PM
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Loved it - how deep
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2025 1:44:00 PM
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Christmas isn't a happy time for many folk behind the sparkly lights there is much darkness and sadness - a poignant piece my friend. hugs Jan xx
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/9/2025 1:01:00 PM
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Arthur, this has a stunning impact. We live in difficult times, but we know in our hearts that when we have friends, help others, and have a general direction for doing good; then we have a satisfying and happy existence. I hope you are well and feeling good. The lights and window displays pale in terms of the importance of having a valid dream!
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Alesia Leach
Date: 1/8/2025 1:54:00 PM
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Magnificent! Every word is placed perfectly.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/14/2025 12:23:00 AM
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Thank you , so very kind of you to say.
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Sotto Poet
Date: 1/7/2025 12:27:00 PM
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You have crafted a magnificent poem. The way you composed the verse was brilliant.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/7/2025 8:29:00 PM
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Thank you kindly Sotto!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/7/2025 3:03:00 AM
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Your poem is in a majestic form. I loved how you formatted your poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2025 1:06:00 AM
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- Deep thoughts, Arthur - I wish you a peaceful and happy new year :) - hugs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/7/2025 1:10:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise :)

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