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My confession I murdered them all impostors claims of poetic devices when the evidence was only rants piled upon rants A circle of praises made the courts dizzy the frauds committed only added to their notoriety under oath all their poems shattered The judge looked me in the eye how do you plead sir "Guilty as charged your honour" I here by then sentence you to 19 days you must pay for each crime one day for each scoundrel exposed

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/24/2024 10:58:00 AM

Is this one about trump.? It fits the theme If so its well ahead of The current reality.. though Thats now on show.' LOL))) I don't know if any poilitcan dosen't Answer to the same master lo? I take Notice of Julian Asaunge.' How many different Presidents have kept him in the choky ' its really No jokey.!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 9/25/2023 7:01:00 PM

I'm not big into wine, but when I saw this brand with Snoop featured on the cover, I had to laugh... and buy it. Your poem is creative.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/25/2023 9:25:00 PM

Yes, I love wine, but in this case I love the labels, they are very creative!!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2023 8:23:00 AM

Dear Arthur, though on the surface your intriguing poem seems to be about a whiskey brand, it could also be a deeper dive with your incisive pen that cuts more deeply exposing what needs to be excised. Much here to "pour" though and mull over, dear poet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/25/2023 9:24:00 PM

Thank you for kind words!!!

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/22/2023 7:28:00 AM

well written poem.Hope those criminals are there where they should be. have great day!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/25/2023 9:23:00 PM

They seem to evade poetic justice all the time! :) thanks!!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/18/2023 8:45:00 PM

First, my apologizes Mark Koplin, the ones insulted you I should have deleted their comments faster. Is sad so see such immaturity from these trolls and that's exactly what they are, I have seen them pick on others too. I have also blocked them from commenting on my page. What's funny they play the victim, a trait of narcissists by the way, but their character and actions it seems never changes and speaks volumes. Hope you have a great day.

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/19/2023 4:24:00 AM

Thank you for that Art! Some people just blindly follow others without knowing the facts. As sad as that is it’s just life. You don’t ever have to delete anyone because of me, I’ve developed leather skin. Have a good day my friend!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/18/2023 12:07:00 AM

A great write Arthur, poets should not write in spite, much better to be kind and nice. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle

Eve Roper

Date: 9/17/2023 7:09:00 PM

back with congratulations

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/17/2023 12:24:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Art, on POTD!

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/17/2023 12:04:00 PM

A very well written, thoughtful poem Arthur. Really enjoyed reading it. Many congratulations on POTD.:)

Bill Baker

Date: 9/17/2023 10:18:00 AM

Crime doesn't pay! In the end the Truth will be known. Congratulations on your POTD, Arthur. Bill

Jan Allison

Date: 9/17/2023 8:41:00 AM

19 Crimes, I'm drunk on your words Art! Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 9/17/2023 6:55:00 AM

You get praise from me for your POTD, Arthur. Guilty ones don't want the blame so pass their guilt off on others.

Mark Koplin
Date: 9/18/2023 6:00:00 AM

A new fan I guess lol

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 10:00:00 PM

I apologize for the rude comment you received here, bullies will always be bullies.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Mark, much appreciated.

Deb M

Date: 9/17/2023 6:10:00 AM

Congratulations Arthur on your well deserved POTD…..lovely to see your name up here! Debx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 2:37:00 PM

Thanks Deb, much appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 9/17/2023 5:56:00 AM

Poetic devices not up to par, Congrats on POTD Arthur

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 1:46:00 PM

Thanks Joseph!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/17/2023 5:55:00 AM

really interesting, Dear Arthur! wonder who the impostors are! Congratulations on your POTD honour!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 1:45:00 PM

Just having a little fun, based on a Wine Brand!!!

Charles Messina

Date: 9/17/2023 3:52:00 AM

Well said and written, Arthur. Congratulations on POTD! In time, those scoundrels will see their day. Cheers!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/17/2023 3:48:00 AM

Well done..."criminals" are in every venture in which I've been involved. Anyway, I digress...congrats on POTD!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/17/2023 1:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. These "criminals" will never stop. It's in their blood. Great poem.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/17/2023 12:56:00 AM

I think we all come across those criminals as we go through life, best avoid them at any cost, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD Arthur. Tom

Deb M

Date: 9/16/2023 12:20:00 PM

So well written and said Arthur! I know some of them l do believe! Hehe….Debx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 6:43:00 PM

Cheers, I having a glass of 19 Crimes now!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/16/2023 8:50:00 AM

Art, an interesting perspective, imposters in my opinion are ones who write flowery, no nonsense poems that may have been copied using AI, well penned.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 6:30:00 PM

ah yes, that AI is a tricky thing, but it can be used for Good as well as bad! Thanks!! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/16/2023 7:12:00 AM

My friend, you have crafted a captivating masterpiece. Your words unveil the cunning villains who revel in their deceitful shroud.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 6:29:00 PM

Thanks you Sotto Poet, always a delight to read both your Poetry and comments.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/16/2023 4:56:00 AM

My friend a very thought-provoking new creation. Your verses expose those villains that like to hide. I suggest about 69 day myself. A FAV. God bless you my friend.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 6:27:00 PM

Thanks Robert.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2023 4:38:00 AM

thought provoking piece Art, I guess I am guilty of writing poop poetry and the occasional rant but if you can expose any real villains even better lol . Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 6:26:00 PM

Villains often do not realize it but they expose themselves, a fine example here it seems!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/16/2023 4:03:00 AM

poetic culprits? Oh my...a fine read, Arthur. I suppose we can all commit poetic crimes from time to time, sometimes knowingly and perhaps sometimes not. I can rant sometimes, caught up in my own words that I don't realize I'm carrying on so. Enjoy your day, Sara

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/17/2023 6:25:00 PM

Thanks! and I sure have committed some poetic crimes, we are all learning!