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My Angel

I beg you
stay a littler longer
you are to me
as the moon is to the night
I will never forget
my dream was to hold you 
in my arms
with whispers of delight

Copyright © Arthur Vaso | Year Posted 2024

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

June 26, 2024 at 7:09 AM

Lovely romance!

June 22, 2024 at 7:01 AM

Arthur, this feeling of loss expressed so elegantly. When we experience it like this, it reveals the depth of our soul. You are so very kind to share this feeling expressed so directly and beautifully. I think anyone reading this (including me) feel the words that can bring tears to our eyes.

June 15, 2024 at 11:52 PM

You have melted my heart. xoxo

June 27, 2024 at 12:36 AM

Loss is always so painful, thank you.

Christina Bowring

June 15, 2024 at 1:49 PM

This is such a beautifully romantic poem dear Arthur. Pure and serene. It has great impact and I love your poetically chosen words to convey love so exquisitely. So enjoyed it. Blessings to you.

June 27, 2024 at 12:36 AM

You are very kind, i thank you from my heart.

June 8, 2024 at 8:18 AM

A serene composition, wonderful in its spareness, enriched with your vivid images and analogies. Wonderful romantic poetry... What exquisite poetry.

June 8, 2024 at 2:04 PM

As always you are very kind, thanks!!

Eileen Manassian

June 8, 2024 at 3:10 AM

Absolutely delightful. I enjoyed this from the beginning till the end. Blessings, dear

June 8, 2024 at 2:04 PM

Thank you Eileen, have a great day!

June 5, 2024 at 7:33 PM

A cute little romantic verse... So beautifully written... Loved it...

June 5, 2024 at 11:59 PM

Thank you so much for your kind soft words!

June 4, 2024 at 4:40 PM

avery sincere poem, poet you say the best, you really love my friend, thanks a lot for your encouraging comments yann

June 4, 2024 at 11:32 PM

Merci bien, thank you Yann.

Hilda Greenhough

June 4, 2024 at 1:36 PM

A simply sweet poem, I liked it's sense of romance.

June 4, 2024 at 11:31 PM

Thanks Hilda.

Victor Buhagiar

June 3, 2024 at 9:28 AM

This is pure romance at its best.

June 4, 2024 at 11:31 PM

Thank you Victor, very nice of you!

Paula Goldsmith

June 3, 2024 at 7:43 AM

I enjoyed reading "My Angel" write. It is lovely/romantic. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away.......................

June 4, 2024 at 11:30 PM

Very kind of you, thanks Paula

June 3, 2024 at 7:09 AM

Arthur, your poetry is really lovely. Love is the force that propels humankind forward.

June 4, 2024 at 11:30 PM

Yes I surely wish this to be true!

June 3, 2024 at 7:03 AM

Very sweet!

June 4, 2024 at 11:29 PM

Thanks Kim.

June 3, 2024 at 4:36 AM

Ahhh!! Romantic. Sara K

June 4, 2024 at 11:29 PM

Thank you Sara :)

June 3, 2024 at 4:35 AM

Now who is this loving sweet poem about Arthur! Enjoyed! Debx

June 4, 2024 at 11:28 PM

Thanks Deb!

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