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Notes About The Poem

I Died

For your sins
cheaters
clickers
unbelievers
nineteen crimes
peddling dimes

Now I have risen
from the broth
carry on dear soupsters
until I decide
is all for naught
in silence
I reign
King Arthur
fear not
my heartbroken devils

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Crystol Woods Date: 4/28/2024 10:11:00 AM Il have to admit, I'm not educated in poetry enough to fully gather all of the meaning I sense in this piece but I do love the language and mystery of it... some humor I believe? Forgive my ignorance. Best to you, Crystol Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/8/2023 10:01:00 PM arise KING arthur, you have a wicked sense of humour lol:-) I prefer my soup a little less rancid and bitter though. hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 10/9/2023 1:02:00 AM I hear you, we need to fix this situation!!!!! hahaha

Bill Baker Date: 10/7/2023 4:43:00 PM Who is this mystery writer of tale of old? Who has once again come to tease us with poetry? looks like it's Arthur to me. Write On! Bill Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 10/8/2023 12:30:00 AM Thanks Bill you are a kind soul.

The Situation Date: 10/7/2023 2:41:00 PM I know it's free verse but this should have a name. It provoking. Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 10/9/2023 1:01:00 AM and a very bizarre situation indeed. Arthur Vaso Date: 10/8/2023 12:30:00 AM Not sure what you mean, the poem of course has a name but it is ironic to get a comment like this from someone who does not use a name.

Sandra Adams Date: 10/5/2023 6:24:00 PM enjoyed the twist in the second stanza, guess there is always plenty of broth to rise from in a good soup! good write! Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 10/8/2023 12:26:00 AM Thanks Sandra, was just having a wee bit of fun!

Yann Rolland Date: 10/5/2023 12:25:00 PM and all trouble could vanished with this powerful words, and King Arthur, lovely poem to retain have a nice day Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 10/5/2023 2:52:00 PM Merci bien, mort ou vivant, j'essaye d'être drôle !

Deb M Date: 10/5/2023 10:04:00 AM King Arthur you say haha!! You made me smile especially “since you have risen from the broth” Cheeky write !!! Debx Login to Reply Arthur Vaso Date: 10/5/2023 2:53:00 PM I am a funny Guy, thanks Deb!