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For your sins cheaters clickers unbelievers nineteen crimes peddling dimes Now I have risen from the broth carry on dear soupsters until I decide is all for naught in silence I reign King Arthur fear not my heartbroken devils

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Crystol Woods

Date: 4/28/2024 10:11:00 AM

Il have to admit, I'm not educated in poetry enough to fully gather all of the meaning I sense in this piece but I do love the language and mystery of it... some humor I believe? Forgive my ignorance. Best to you, Crystol

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2023 10:01:00 PM

arise KING arthur, you have a wicked sense of humour lol:-) I prefer my soup a little less rancid and bitter though. hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/9/2023 1:02:00 AM

I hear you, we need to fix this situation!!!!! hahaha

Bill Baker

Date: 10/7/2023 4:43:00 PM

Who is this mystery writer of tale of old? Who has once again come to tease us with poetry? looks like it's Arthur to me. Write On! Bill

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/8/2023 12:30:00 AM

Thanks Bill you are a kind soul.

The Situation

Date: 10/7/2023 2:41:00 PM

I know it's free verse but this should have a name. It provoking.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/9/2023 1:01:00 AM

and a very bizarre situation indeed.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/8/2023 12:30:00 AM

Not sure what you mean, the poem of course has a name but it is ironic to get a comment like this from someone who does not use a name.

Lin Lane

Date: 10/5/2023 8:29:00 PM

Is it possible for a devil to have a broken heart? You can rise from the broth but may you forever haunt the kitchen.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/8/2023 12:29:00 AM

I stand corrected, broken legs and arms is more fitting, for the devil that is, not my devilish humor! :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/5/2023 6:24:00 PM

enjoyed the twist in the second stanza, guess there is always plenty of broth to rise from in a good soup! good write!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/8/2023 12:26:00 AM

Thanks Sandra, was just having a wee bit of fun!

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/5/2023 12:25:00 PM

and all trouble could vanished with this powerful words, and King Arthur, lovely poem to retain have a nice day

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/5/2023 2:52:00 PM

Merci bien, mort ou vivant, j'essaye d'être drôle !

Deb M

Date: 10/5/2023 10:04:00 AM

King Arthur you say haha!! You made me smile especially “since you have risen from the broth” Cheeky write !!! Debx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/5/2023 2:53:00 PM

I am a funny Guy, thanks Deb!