Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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I Died

For your sins
cheaters
clickers
unbelievers
nineteen crimes
peddling dimes

Now I have risen
from the broth
carry on dear soupsters
until I decide
is all for naught
in silence
I reign
King Arthur
fear not
my heartbroken devils

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Crystol Woods April 28, 2024 at 10:11 AM Il have to admit, I'm not educated in poetry enough to fully gather all of the meaning I sense in this piece but I do love the language and mystery of it... some humor I believe? Forgive my ignorance. Best to you, Crystol

Jan Allison October 8, 2023 at 10:01 PM arise KING arthur, you have a wicked sense of humour lol:-) I prefer my soup a little less rancid and bitter though. hugs Jan xx Arthur Vaso October 9, 2023 at 1:02 AM I hear you, we need to fix this situation!!!!! hahaha

Bill Baker October 7, 2023 at 4:43 PM Who is this mystery writer of tale of old? Who has once again come to tease us with poetry? looks like it's Arthur to me. Write On! Bill Arthur Vaso October 8, 2023 at 12:30 AM Thanks Bill you are a kind soul.

The Situation October 7, 2023 at 2:41 PM I know it's free verse but this should have a name. It provoking. Arthur Vaso October 9, 2023 at 1:01 AM and a very bizarre situation indeed. Arthur Vaso October 8, 2023 at 12:30 AM Not sure what you mean, the poem of course has a name but it is ironic to get a comment like this from someone who does not use a name.

Sandra Adams October 5, 2023 at 6:24 PM enjoyed the twist in the second stanza, guess there is always plenty of broth to rise from in a good soup! good write! Arthur Vaso October 8, 2023 at 12:26 AM Thanks Sandra, was just having a wee bit of fun!

Yann Rolland October 5, 2023 at 12:25 PM and all trouble could vanished with this powerful words, and King Arthur, lovely poem to retain have a nice day Arthur Vaso October 5, 2023 at 2:52 PM Merci bien, mort ou vivant, j'essaye d'être drôle !

Deb M October 5, 2023 at 10:04 AM King Arthur you say haha!! You made me smile especially “since you have risen from the broth” Cheeky write !!! Debx Arthur Vaso October 5, 2023 at 2:53 PM I am a funny Guy, thanks Deb!