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Those Words

I speak my thoughts with gentleness The things I need to say with care Thoughts held in my hands, gone through my fingers, balanced on my fingertips... ... sent to my lips. I speak my words with thoughtfulness from my faltering tongue The air swaying rippling with meaningful sound I speak my words out loud, they land where I want them to bloom Sometimes as small white daisies Other times as beautiful blue thistles or roses. I watch them grow, my eyes follow their independent will and stubbornness With pride I stretch my hands to pick them and arrange... They grew on me. *** September 21, 2017 Copyright © Darren White
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Talbot Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 8:05 PM
. . . . . . . . . . . . . your heart felt words... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .flow with ease... your passion guides . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .your readied quill...
White Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 5:22 AM
Thanks Mick, much appreciated :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 5:30 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Darren. Ty for letting us readers get a glimpse inside your compassionate soul. A serene place to have nice sit-down and quiet verbal handshakes of chocolate idea exchanges. Your gifted golden winged pen soars again. A poetic bejeweled masterpiece. Love and many blessings of peace and happiness.
White Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 2:27 AM
Freddie thank you so much for your overwhelming beautiful words! Love to you too my friend :)
Devnath  Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 1:10 PM
Very nicely expressed your heartfelt thoughts. Lovely indeed. Loved always my lovely dear friend, bl
White Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:49 AM
BL my friend, thank you :)
Marine Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 1:46 PM
You are a Gentle Soul, Darren...I only wish that I could follow your brave example..I truly appreciate your poem- thought provoking...( now read it three times..: D )
White Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:49 AM
Thank you so much, love your name by the way :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:36 PM
I also like this poem you have written. I like the way all the words flow together.Have a nice day my friend.
White Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Thank you Darlene, that's so nice of you :)
Lindley Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Words have a way of becoming reality--tis best that they are good, kind and gentle utterings. Great poetry my friend.. A fav....
White Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 12:39 PM
Wonderful Robert, thank you so much my friend :)
Duet Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 11:03 PM
Wow, Darren! I just love this one. So thoughtful. And, yes, our words are so important and can be so powerful too. I especially like the line: "...balanced on my fingertips". Perfect!
White Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 1:33 AM
Carole, thank you so very much. And yes, I love that part too :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:49 AM
As always ~ your lovely words, like a majestic kiss, my friend!
White Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Thank you so much, those are beautiful words :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Gentle and true words of wisdom. Well written Darren.
White Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 12:42 AM
Thank you so very much, Janis :)
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 12:21 PM
wise words indeed Darren and your words always touch my heart - you have such a voice through your poetry:-) hugs jan xx
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so much my friend :)
Cresswell Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Hi Darren, the person, you, who wrote this poem is a gift to poetry.
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Hi Patricia, thank you my friend.
B. Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 1:58 PM
Darren, You have a beautiful soul. Great write. :)
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Thank you so much Carol!
Vaso Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 8:19 PM
ah, I see the greats are out tonight Hafiz and Harif! this is such wonderful poetry Darren. Amazing!
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Hahaha, you always make me laugh :) Thanks!
Ella Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:14 PM
I love this - it is a favorite! :D
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Thanks my sweet friend :)
Roberts Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Darren this is soooo good.....Seren fav
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:56 AM
Wow Seren, thanks so much :)
Gentile Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 1:37 PM
This is so beautiful, Darren and an important vie of words and their power.
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Thank you so much, Mike
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September 22, 2017 at 1:15 PM
I love this Darren. Tender and eloquent. Fave dear, love and warm wishes for you xomo
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:55 AM
thanks my friend :)
Smith Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 9:46 AM
So so beautiful....a fav
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:54 AM
Wow, thanks my friend :)
Daniel Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Great and deep thoughts, Darren:)
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:54 AM
Thank you so much, Jo :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Beautiful, Darren!! You have one typo - other. I love the use of white daisies, blue thistles. Each stanza so lovely.
White Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
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