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Blog Posted:10/17/2022 2:18:00 PM

Many judges, including me, will move beyond poems as read and therefore never revisit them. My advice, especially on a poem that requires some specific elements, is to revisit them the next day to make sure of your intentions relative to the rquirements. Very often, in rereading, you can expose errors or things you may want to change. Note this - if you find something, it's important to delete your entry, edit it and resubmit it into the contest or it is likely to remain in the disgarded section and your edit may never be read in corrected form. Also, in one of my contests do not refer to syllable counters etc--I DON'T CARE-- I will feel the flow regardless of any extracurricular interpretations and it's actually an insult. Flow is rarely achieved by syllable count, nor by precise meter, yet is hindered by (much like an uneven step on a walkway) an unexpected obstruction in flow. I'm not referring to free verse here, where the reader enters at their own risk, yet at the author's welcome. A poem in meter must make the path free of stumble points. Take , for instance, Longfellow - "Listen my children and you shall hear, of the midnight ride of Paul Revere"--It is totally mixed meter, yet it flows. The reason it's important to revisit your write in meter is because we tend to "force" the flow during the writing process but upon revisiting we see/feel/hear the error that was not evident on our first draft. The more fun we have in the process, the easier it is. So much of what we have read over the years has been in some catchy beat--"the moon on the crest of the new fallen snow gave the luster of midday to objects below"---(almost all in anapest) starting with "on the crest" and perfect flow. 



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Date: 10/19/2022 10:34:00 AM
I agree with you about syllables. If a poet understands meter, they should not be concerned with exact syllable count. Sometimes being exact can actually throw off the beat, but because of a sponsor's syllable requirement, I am forced to write the poem that way (at least we can change it later). There is an exception when I think syllable count matters. That's for haiku and other short Asian forms. Haiku are meant to be really short and even the old style 5/7/5 is more syllables than Haiku Society prefers!! But to be fair, I always require 5/7/5 or LESS.
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Date: 10/18/2022 1:24:00 PM
useful info to bear in mind if i'm editing entries, i'm always tweaking and fiddling lol.:)
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Date: 10/18/2022 8:52:00 AM
Craig, thank you so much for the informative blog, I am not very good with meter, and I know that if I could master meter my poetry would be so much better. But, I am going to try your new contest anyway and hope for the best, though win or lose it will be a lesson in writing poetry, blessings Constance
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Date: 10/18/2022 8:03:00 AM
Craig, I always read poems a few times and out loud so that I can be swept up in the cadence/meter etc. On a few occasions I have mistaken a gallop for a trot and oh what a different ride.....your advice in this blog is applicable to all readings of poetry...
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Date: 10/18/2022 8:15:00 AM
That's why your flow is always so flawless John!
Date: 10/18/2022 7:15:00 AM
Please do NOT center your entries - do it after the contest if you want but not until then or they'll be disqualified.
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Date: 10/17/2022 6:08:00 PM
If you can ride a horse, you can master meter, a canter, a trot or a gallop is all you need. If you cannot become one with its stride, you will get thrown off, as will your reader.
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Date: 10/17/2022 7:08:00 PM
Funny that you made that reference in that the mix of meter Longfellow used in Paul Revere's Ride echoes the beat of a horse's hooves.
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Date: 10/17/2022 6:09:00 PM
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