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Entrenching Reality

Through sand and pebbles, like a snare brush scratch, while cannon rumble in horizon's flash and hearts of digger's hurried cadence match as song of shovel sings a cymbal's clash. oak handle worn much like a polished cane from calloused hands around the shovel's brow, it glowed in moonlight 'fore the devil's bane, just like a candle on a Christmas bough. In olive drab, the blade like sea-dipped oar, scratched through a mirror in the midnight mud which shook from fear and from the battle's roar and smudged from tincture of a youthful blood. Yet years from now a little child will hold this shovel, and a castle to behold...

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Date: 8/21/2023 4:03:00 PM
so touching images, a great punchline, enjoyed
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Craig Cornish
Date: 8/22/2023 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Yann!

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