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When Doves Cry

The mourning doves and white doves gathered nigh - together, send their coos into the breeze, and looked upon the sky from whence they fly- Why is it that their hearts are so at ease? Perhaps a nudge from heaven up above, a whisper in the ear of God himself, "Please free from lasting grief those that I love, and pain that I cannot endure myself"... I know that Heaven celebrates my birth, much like a baby held in outstretched arms - this ... unique and fleeting moment of my worth now hold those hearts I love and do no harm. Still, from our souls, the tears will gently flow, into a place where seeds of memories grow...

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Date: 8/1/2023 6:05:00 PM
Aah, I read this gem on Facebook. Class A poetry as always
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Date: 7/30/2023 4:08:00 PM
Such elegance
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Date: 7/29/2023 10:20:00 PM
Loved that ending line. Wonderful sentiments in the entire piece. If it's for a contest, good luck!
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Craig Cornish
Date: 7/30/2023 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Dear Eileen - Miss you and hope your Dad is doing well?
Date: 7/29/2023 8:50:00 PM
Such a lovely sonnet that showcases your take on the subject of doves that cry and mourning the loss of a loved one, Craig. I’m always thrilled to read your poetry! :)
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Craig Cornish
Date: 7/30/2023 10:31:00 AM
Honored Laura - because you have a way of capturing your heart on your pen as well

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