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Yin - Yang

the silence that listens - the stillness that anticipates what is one becomes the other Earth spins from yin to yang - dark to light - death to growth what is one becomes the other infinite duality less than grains of sand in a mirror that reflects nothing but a fleeting conscience - seeds from death that grow in the light black is white and...

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/24/2024 11:11:00 AM

What a deep write this is dear Craig, I absolutely love the way youv written this and left me pondering and thinking in so many different ways. This has a philosophical touch to it, especially the lines “ what is one becomes the other“ that really stood out for me as well as how your poem ended, black is white and… so thought provoking. I think, silence, listens and speaks volumes, when one is silent theres so many answers and truth that flows, but id only we listen too, and connect with silence. I really enjoyed reading this. And is very inspiring too, always a pleasure reading your work. Love this

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/19/2024 5:37:00 AM

Hello Craig Your poem beautifully captures the essence of the yin-yang balance in the universe. How you depict the transition from silence to sound, stillness to movement, and darkness to light is profound and mesmerizing. It's a constant flux of life, where opposites are intertwined, each necessary for the existence of the other. Your words provoke deep reflection on the intricacies of existence and the eternal dance of duality. It is a very thought-provoking piece.- Blessings, Daniel Warm regards,

Arlo Parker

Date: 3/18/2024 1:54:00 PM

Evocative piece explores existential issues. ….”black is white and God is light…” :-)

Tom Woody

Date: 3/18/2024 1:10:00 PM

I don't buy the philosophy, but sure is a cool poem. Sparse, succinct, poetic

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/18/2024 10:41:00 AM

Glad I read this after I wrote mine - excellent