Fading Hopes

The twilight shades of fate are slowly drawn;
like charcoal sketches - shadows wrap the day
and while I ponder, all the light is gone,
behind a dream where futile wishes stay.
Now here, in selfish pity, is the night,
where once we danced and swore that love would last;
instead its chills now silently alight
and stings like frost when Autumn days have passed.
Sad truths can leave us hiding in the shade
like photographs portrayed in gray and black,
I'm lost like wistful wishes that I made,
and trying to fill the colors that are lacked.
Still, in the shadows, secrets beckon us
to where we know are truths that we can trust.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Now THIS is your strength, writing a sonnet like ThIS!
Lindley Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Definitely a top class sonnet. One that inspires and brings a great deal of reality into light of day. About how this dark and unmerciful world operates and man is but a pawn in its savage and ghastly game of life and death. A fav.. God bless...
Cornish Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Thanks so much Robert!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 6:19 AM
Lovely sonnet... alive with inspiration. Enjoyed. God bless you
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 3:33 PM
An excellent sonnet Craig, enjoyed, probably many are feeling this way lately!
Cornish Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 4:04 PM
thanks so much John - it was inspired by your contest.
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