Don'T Quit Your Daydream

(This, written from the viewpoint of a young lady missing her beau at war)

When in a moment's sweet repose
I paused in midst of thought and knew
it was this place in time you chose
to stop ... and think upon me too.

Your favorite poem was on my lips
and melodies swept through my mind
until they stopped and softly kissed
the dreams each memory provides.

Then, through a fog of thoughts you strode
and reached as if to beckon me,
"You are the blushed and fragile rose
that in my heart will always be".

With that you smiled and turned away -
in daydreams born another day ...

(in iambic tetrameter)
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Ashley Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 8:50 PM
Dear Craig, the beauty of your rhythm and rhymes allowed the emotions of this poem to wash over me in a silky wave. Love the viewpoint and your couplet for a smooth finish. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
November 26, 2022 at 4:27 PM
Thank you, Craig, for your kind words. I relished the opportunity to learn how to write in anapestic tetrameter. Your wonderful contest pushed me beyond my comfort zone and for that I am ever grateful..
Cornish Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 5:30 AM
Thank you, Susan & great job again on your contest sonnet
Hankins Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 9:57 AM
A lovely, thoughtful poem, Craig. I think many women of my generation could relate to it. Loved the rhythm of the piece.
Cornish Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 5:28 AM
Thank you, Milt
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