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Fate Cannot Wait

I'm quite sure that I won't be late To your home on our very first date You don't know me for sure But I have a great cure And a feeling that fate cannot wait

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/29/2024 4:19:00 PM

Sweet! Congratulations on second place!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/29/2024 1:57:00 PM

A smooth one. Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2024 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Sara K

Suzette Richards

Date: 1/29/2024 4:43:00 AM

Brilliantly penned, with a hint at things to come ... Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Craig.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/24/2024 6:40:00 AM

Your limericks are as brilliant as every other poem, i can see this is a pick up line, you clearly know what would intrigue them, especially when one says “ i know the cure” and also promising that you wont be late for the first date. Thats clever, loved the rhymes too in this. Best wishes if its for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2024 8:35:00 AM

- Great written ... sometimes we have to let fate decide ... good luck :) - hugs