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Fate Cannot Wait

I'm quite sure that I won't be late
To your home on our very first date
    You don't know me for sure
    But I have a great cure
And a feeling that fate cannot wait

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Kim Rodrigues

January 29, 2024 at 4:19 PM

Sweet! Congratulations on second place!

Richard Lamoureux

January 29, 2024 at 1:57 PM

A smooth one. Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2024 at 7:27 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Sara K

Suzette Richards

January 29, 2024 at 4:43 AM

Brilliantly penned, with a hint at things to come ... Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Craig.

Ink Empress

January 24, 2024 at 6:40 AM

Your limericks are as brilliant as every other poem, i can see this is a pick up line, you clearly know what would intrigue them, especially when one says “ i know the cure” and also promising that you wont be late for the first date. Thats clever, loved the rhymes too in this. Best wishes if its for the contest