The Unsupervised Stop Sign

When siren screams become silent
to ears for which a heart has stopped;
billions of beats - a billion thoughts,
are not stilled, they survive
in pauses that stare, and dreams
        that start awake
and in journals where scribbles trace
where those thoughts rhyme and wander.

There's a sign ahead, at trail's end,
yet no one's there to wake us,
      to say - don't go, but,
we've already moved beyond...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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October 21, 2023 at 5:10 AM
This is such a brilliant and thought-provoking take for the contest!! You've conveyed a very deep sense of philosophical perspective that stirred my soul.. It's really unique.. It definitely conveyed thoughts that anyone can't actually fathom just in one heartbeat.. Really profound! A treasure of a write "When siren screams become silent to ears for which a heart has stopped;", "There's a sign ahead, at trail's end, yet no one's there to wake us" This says so much! Loved reading this & a FAV :)
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October 23, 2023 at 12:06 PM
So very kind Hiya, thank you!
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October 18, 2023 at 10:19 AM
This is so very deep and profound! Only a very experienced and one with a very philosophical mind can write something like this! Im looking at this contest, thinking of writing. And seeing yours made me go whoa! Especially “ There's a sign ahead, at trail's end, yet no one's there to wake us,“ such profound truths! Love this, fave for me
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October 18, 2023 at 7:53 PM
Thank you Inky, too kind - it's all both complicated and simple - so often we drive by the exit - habit...or wanton disregard?
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