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Anatomy of Melancholy

In dizzy terrors, the ominous, relentless pull of the numb night; sneers, shortcuts clumsily trod; meandering the easy paths where sins and lies are perfected and nourished into pseudo truths that are delightfully embraced. A credible potpourri of slippery stones in a quagmire of guilt. A quicksand of snickering gravity where nothing escapes except the last one who cared. Suffocating in our insignificance, too late for sincere tears, too late to reach for no one.

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Date: 8/1/2023 6:07:00 PM
Whew! This goes beyond melancholy into outright depression and angst. Pseudo truths easily embraced, self delusion enhanced. Great stuff
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Date: 5/17/2023 12:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... making me learn all the more the essence of "showing" in creative writing. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. Such is great encouragement for me to keep on learning. God bless you.
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