A Silent Kind of Blue

there is no hush...when silent dreams can scream
and echo through the haze yesterdays
just like the thoughts that float upon a stream
are lost in lackadaisical malaise

no peace within this torrid kind of blue
- horizons that portend more of the same
then taunt with hints of calm where wishes flew
to where they hide - and no one has a name

a sultry sax weeps like the sallow trees
as tickled keys stall on a lazy chord -
a cloud sails through blown by a trumpet's breeze
and patience snares its improvised reward

    all tangled in a thought that never ends
    - that solo break where sanity pretends
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 1:29 PM
Dear Craig, your sonnet is simply, sadly beautiful, capturing a melancholy, a wistful feeling in contemplative imagery laced in flawless rhythm and rhymes. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 9:52 PM
Excellent sonneteering . Great meter and theme. Way to go in this portion of the marathon.
Godwin Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 2:49 PM
Wonderful writing, the 3rd stanza was especially gorgeous to me. Congratulations on your placement, Craig. Rhetorical question, why don't people congratulate one another anymore? Contests used to be an opportunity for one's poem to get more reads. Oh, Vell.
Toney Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 6:21 AM
Craig, “A Silent Kind of Blue” combines music and melancholy into a soulful refrain. Love the “sultry sax… tickled keys… trumpet’s breeze and patience snares its improvised rewards.” The last two lines are exquisite. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 18 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 19 has already started.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 10:44 AM
a sultry sax weeps like the sallow trees…ooh love this line, Craig!
Cornish Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Thanks so much Kim!
Ermine Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 10:35 PM
Absolutely cool concept. Relish your verse, Craig. Haunted by happenings, continuing to function smoothly, - Silent Blue. Love your submission.
Cornish Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Segrid, but of course you know this is just thoughts about the contest I posted. Usually, when I post a prompt/inspiration, I don't even have any clue what I might write to it but think that if I am to expect others to write to it, I should expect the same from myself- but- unlike most politicians, I'm not narcissistic enough to enter it in my own contest, but it was fun anyway! Hope you come up with something yourself...
Rebstock Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Very creative
Cornish Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Thank you Shirley
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