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Let's Tango

So many worlds work as one; a symbiotic tango where no feet are ever stepped on - no pardons conferred. An intersection of nature, busy, yet no traffic lights nor accidents or road rage. A seductive tease where cold shoulders and hot glances share equal stage - smirking. The first blanket of leaves lie soaked beneath the shuffling of the last, covers the naked dancing/celebrating worms and sprouts who feast on the nourishing gifts of Autumn now winter worn to perfection. Waiting, a red-breast is filled, and on high, new leaves are born to hide their summer nests.

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Date: 3/16/2024 6:16:00 PM
Dear Craig, This is a mesmerizing dance of words, piecing together imagery and metaphor to create a portrait of nature’s intricate harmony. I love how your poem celebrates the symbiotic relationship between all living beings, portraying a world where cooperation and balance reign supreme. Through your lyrical verses, you invite us to embrace the beauty and complexity of the natural world, showing us our interconnectedness with every step of the tango. I love how your poem is illuminating the dance of life with grace and elegance. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/16/2024 10:05:00 AM
What a beautiful and deep write this is dear craig. I really love the way your opening lines made me think, and how your second stanza is so descriptive and so picturesque as well as with soulful lines that truly would leave any reader inspired, especially love “ The first blanket of leaves lie soaked beneath the shuffling of the last,” the way you show through words is impeccable, how youve highlighted nature and passing time and reflecting opposites and interconnected rhythm of life. BOL
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