The Clearing

Stumbling through midnight blackness,
with every step and thought,
trepidation is my only companion
on a streambed's bank - unsteady
where pain and serpents wait,
an unwelcome visitation.
They fear as we, this intrusion
         of peace.

Do hopes dissolve here where
loneliness feasts on sanity!
I wish not to disturb these
   denizens of my dreams.

Rather, I will glimpse
the Southern Cross in
one brief moment of clarity
and...find my way home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 2/26/2023 6:57:00 AM
a nice bit of free verse here, craig, it's always interesting to read your take on your own contest themes..thank you for my placement in your contest - you have no idea how i wrestled with that poem lol
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Date: 2/26/2023 8:45:00 AM
Honored that you wrote to it Charlotte! This is actually a true recollection of mine, as I'm certain yours was. When I was in Army training they had this escape and evasion drill where they set us out on one side of a densely wooded area and we were to find our way through. It was Louisiana, so there were snakes and steep banks next to streams. It was so dark (there were 6 of us and we had to hold each others belts incase someone steps off a stream edge--we were happy to get to a clearing to get our bearing in the stars.
Date: 2/18/2023 4:18:00 AM
Someone wrote a poem about this one I guess it is supposed to be about this one. This one is very descriptive and expressive. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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