The Siege of Vicksburg

Acoustic shadows haunted hills
and crawled within a sleepless cave
where peace was whispered in a wish 
and silence was an endless prayer.
The sound of tears dripped in the wind
that carried din until it bled
the last of life from hungry lips,
the last of love from hopeless hearts...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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November 15, 2021 at 9:02 PM
This is gorgeous imagery and metaphor, Craig! It brings history into the forefront in a few well chosen words. Love it, a fave! :)
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November 21, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Thanks so much Dear Laura, have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
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