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All Hallows' Eve

(in anapestic tetrameter) As it rolled through the darkness and grinned through the trees, where the shadows lay crawling and scratching the ground - the last remnants of summer now shook in the breeze, on this evening of Hallows that crept all around. On the hearth and the hilltops, the fires burned bright, through the dark, as the spirits so restlessly flew, like the sparks of their souls that were lost in the night. While disguised midst the living, the timid withdrew. Yet the masks and their measure in masquerade mists were exposed in the light of the hallowed full moon and now joyously danced 'til the sun's morning kissed a lost day that portends an impetuous noon. So misplaced is our leisure that our rapture has flown from a garden of worship to an evil unknown...

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Date: 10/27/2022 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on POTW! Only the strong survive, a frightening Hollows Eve, Creig Cornish
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Date: 10/24/2022 5:31:00 PM
"Rapture has flown from a garden of worship to an evil unknown." That image is creepy and a little frightening. Congratulations Craig, on Poem of the Week, with this haunting Halloween Sonnet. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/24/2022 7:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Brandy
Date: 10/24/2022 6:52:00 AM
Craig, I must admit that I was very skeptical when you suggested writing a sonnet in anapestic tetrameter, I thought even Shakespear would be spooked. But after reading this, you make it work very well, congrats on POTW. John
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/24/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thank you, John, Hope you enjoyed the book and thanks for your contributions
Date: 10/23/2022 8:36:00 AM
A marvellous sonnet written in anapestic tetrameter for ‘All Hallows’ Eve’ Craig. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/24/2022 7:58:00 AM
Hi Belle, thank you
Date: 10/23/2022 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW, Craig. Excellent anapestic tetrameter sonnet, my friend. Challenging form to write in, but you've done a fine job of it. Kudos! Well deserved honor. Enjoy your reward! Bill
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/24/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Bill
Date: 10/23/2022 6:14:00 AM
Superb work Craig. A true hallow's haunting. Congratulations on the honor of POTW! :)
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/24/2022 7:57:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 10/23/2022 5:55:00 AM
Craig, a great Halloween poem, congratulations on POTW!
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/24/2022 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Tania
Date: 10/18/2022 9:17:00 PM
A spark of spooky magic and imagination sums up this excellent sonnet, Craig. You create a perfect backdrop for All Hallows’ Eve! I thoroughly enjoyed this one! :) Ps. A fave!
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/19/2022 6:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Laura!
Date: 10/18/2022 9:02:00 PM
Good one Craig, I started writing one of these and got carried away with the anapestic meter
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Craig Cornish
Date: 10/19/2022 6:05:00 AM
Jeff, writing in this meter is a challenge. This took me four days to write and when I thought I was done I found 2 major errors and there may be more LOL - but that's it for now, thanks Jeff.

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