All Hallows' Eve

(in anapestic tetrameter)

As it rolled through the darkness and grinned through the trees,
where the shadows lay crawling and scratching the ground -
the last remnants of summer now shook in the breeze,
on this evening of Hallows that crept all around.

On the hearth and the hilltops, the fires burned bright,
through the dark, as the spirits so restlessly flew,
like the sparks of their souls that were lost in the night.
While disguised midst the living, the timid withdrew.

Yet the masks and their measure in masquerade mists
were exposed in the light of the hallowed full moon
and now joyously danced 'til the sun's morning kissed
a lost day that portends an impetuous noon.

So misplaced is our leisure that our rapture has flown
from a garden of worship to an evil unknown...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Anaya Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on POTW! Only the strong survive, a frightening Hollows Eve, Creig Cornish
Nicole Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 5:31 PM
"Rapture has flown from a garden of worship to an evil unknown." That image is creepy and a little frightening. Congratulations Craig, on Poem of the Week, with this haunting Halloween Sonnet. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Cornish Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:37 PM
Thanks so much Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 6:52 AM
Craig, I must admit that I was very skeptical when you suggested writing a sonnet in anapestic tetrameter, I thought even Shakespear would be spooked. But after reading this, you make it work very well, congrats on POTW. John
Cornish Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, John, Hope you enjoyed the book and thanks for your contributions
Edmonds  Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 8:36 AM
A marvellous sonnet written in anapestic tetrameter for ‘All Hallows’ Eve’ Craig. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle
Cornish Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Hi Belle, thank you
Baker Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTW, Craig. Excellent anapestic tetrameter sonnet, my friend. Challenging form to write in, but you've done a fine job of it. Kudos! Well deserved honor. Enjoy your reward! Bill
Cornish Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Thanks so much Bill
Fowler Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 6:14 AM
Superb work Craig. A true hallow's haunting. Congratulations on the honor of POTW! :)
Cornish Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Thanks Linda!
Kitchin Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 5:55 AM
Craig, a great Halloween poem, congratulations on POTW!
Cornish Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Thank you Tania
Leiser Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 9:17 PM
A spark of spooky magic and imagination sums up this excellent sonnet, Craig. You create a perfect backdrop for All Hallows’ Eve! I thoroughly enjoyed this one! :) Ps. A fave!
Cornish Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:02 AM
Thanks so much Laura!
Kyser Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 9:02 PM
Good one Craig, I started writing one of these and got carried away with the anapestic meter
Cornish Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Jeff, writing in this meter is a challenge. This took me four days to write and when I thought I was done I found 2 major errors and there may be more LOL - but that's it for now, thanks Jeff.
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