Out My Window

kaleidoscopic - it mutates hour to hour,
week to week, season to season
and day to night, when it is still and black
     except for a pensive visage
whose glazed gaze peers back,
almost begging the question, "what"?!

I have no answers, only smudged thoughts;
leaves green and then fall, flowers bloom then wilt,
lives mix and meld - marry and mourn
midst a carousel of brown trucks
     and their hurried drivers
 - sirens and gawking and caring tears
through a lens of what we're made of
and will return to - quenched sand

this unshuttered sash reveals nothing
           and everything
especially when it is still and black
                       and fragile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:38 AM
Dear Craig, wow, a beautifully expressed, thought-provoking piece. Those last four lines are potent! The haunting quality of your poem's finale will linger on my mind. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:52 PM
Thank you for your vote of confidence, Craig. I appreciate it as I truly respect and admire your poetry. I think this final placement carries a lot of weight and nothing is guaranteed that’s for sure. But the marathon has been great fun and it’s been a honor and a privilege to run with you :)
Cornish Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Susan, thank you and!!!! Congrats on your well deserved success in Mark's contest---there is no doubt you deserve first place overall and I'm honored to be on the same page - it's been great fun! Bravo Dear Susan!
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 10:57 AM
As the beatnics used to say: groovy. I dig this!
Cornish Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Thanks so much Andrea!
Toney Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Craig, my favorite lines are, “sirens and gawking and caring tears through a lens of what we're made of and will return to - quenched sand.” Congratulations on your second place win on Mile 19 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 20 has already started.
Cornish Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 4:49 AM
Mark, thanks so much!
Barden Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Very nice … really like this!
Cornish Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 4:49 AM
thank you Greg
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