Craig Cornish Poet Other

Woven Worlds

(Tanka Prose)

The anticipation was palpable, as the field filled with anxious onlookers. Locals mixed with those who had traveled from far away to share a moment~

           the shadow crept
           then it was dark
               eclipse
           something so small hides
           and exposes realities

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Ink Empress March 12, 2024 at 3:45 PM What a deep and profound write this is dear Craig: i really love the depth of this and how you’ve also written “ the shadow crept then it was dark” deep and intriguing: i also love “ something so small hides and exposes realities“ impeccable! Soulfully moving. Pleasure reading always your writes. Craig Cornish March 13, 2024 at 11:39 AM Thanks so much Inky - just simple