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Jeff Kyser is a retired software developer who lives with his wife Frances right ‘round the bend in rural Lacey’s Spring, Alabama. A late comer to the world of poetry, he has been writing contemplative and whimsical pieces on family, on redemption, and on faith for the last several years. His eight grandchildren are the source for much of his inspiration, fueling a desire to spur their imagination and to share his life’s journey with them.


Chiasmus in Poetry

Blog Posted:3/16/2022 5:39:00 AM

Chiasmus ('kigh-AZ-muss') is a literary device used to highlight an idea through the use of mirrored symmetry. An idea is developed either by presenting the same information twice, with the order reversed, or by comparing two things in nested, parallel order. Further, the most important information is generally presented at the center or innermost part of the chiasmus.

Let's look at a couple of examples:

    The first shall be last, and the last shall be first.

Here, the ABB'A' chiasmus is presented in a single line, and we see the first/last pair from the first half of the sentence reversed as last/first in the second half of the sentence. This is used to emphasize or reinforce a point being made: things aren't the way you expect them to be.

Here's the same example spread out over multiple lines with a central idea:

    Those who would be first in the kingdom

        Shall be last

            In the kingdom of heaven

        But those who put themselves last

    Shall be first in the kingdom.

Here, using ABCB'A', we are drawn to "the kingdom of heaven" as the main idea, surrounded by the same first/last, last/first reversal. So we're comparing those who would be first (powerful) to those who are last (the lowly/humble) from the kingdom's perspective.

Here's another, where the central idea is a comparison of two things (ABCC'B'A'):

    For the righteous,

        there will be joyous celebration

            in heaven,

            but in Sheol,

        there will be weeping and gnashing of teeth

    for the wicked.

Here, heaven and Sheol are compared: what they will be like, and who will be there.

The chiasmus is employed in Aramaic and Hebrew writings in the Old Testament, and also in Greek writings in the New Testament, but it is often hard to spot, especially when contained in the prose of a letter. Paul makes extensive use of this literary device in 1 Corinthians, as does Mark in his gospel, but you may never have noticed it.

The formatting introduced in poetry makes this much easier to spot.

I've been thinking it would be interesting to experiment with this, and also to pair it with rhyme. That is certainly not a requirement of chiasmus. Meter is not a requirement either, and in fact, it is common for the second part of a chiasmus to be an expansion of an idea presented in top half of the chiasmus:

    There will be eating and drinking

        at the banquet table;

    there will be much fine food and ever-flowing wine.

A simple rhyming chiasmus might look something like:

    Launching like a flare,

        soaring, joyful mirth,

            slowing to a stall,

                weightless in midair.

            Descending in slow fall,

        screaming back to earth,

    crashing with a prayer.

In this ABCDC'B'A' chiasmus, the rhyming scheme employed is ABCACBA.

I also added a poem, I will be with you: chiasmus, that utilizes rhyming in an ABCDD'C'B'A'.

The chiasmus does not dictate a particular form, and you can probably think of many forms that could support it. You might think of a haiku, with its 5/7/5, as making a good ABA' chiasmus, but that really breaks the idea of the haiku, where the last line is to be a surprise or seemingly unrelated idea. A Tristich probably works better for an ABA'. 

A Quatrain can be well suited: the ABBA form could hold an ABB'A' chiasmus.

Your imagination can run wild with other rhyme schemes as well.

So I wondered if anyone out here in Souplandia had experimented with these before? I would also love some comments and feedback. Thought it was interesting, and hope you might find it so too!

 



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Date: 3/22/2022 9:06:00 AM
Jeff, thanks for sharing this, it was so interesting and helpful ~Constance
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Date: 3/19/2022 5:36:00 AM
I enjoyed your blog, Jeff. You gave a thorough explanation of chiasmus poetry. I was particularly interested in the fact that you can find this structure in 1 Corinthians and Mark! I may have tried this before but your details, simply laid out, add to my understanding. I will have to try again. God bless you ~ Kim
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Date: 3/19/2022 5:45:00 AM
Hi Kim, after I posted the original, I found that link below at literarystructure.info - it is pretty incredible. Also, I find the idea of combining chiasmus with something like Milt Hankin's verso-rhyme form pretty neat and there may be some other interesting ways to explore this.
Date: 3/18/2022 1:16:00 PM
Wow, here's a fabulous summary of chiastic structures in the Bible: http://www.bible.literarystructure.info/bible/bible_e.html
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Date: 3/18/2022 10:26:00 AM
A nice one from Isaiah 6:9-10 “‘Keep on hearing, but do not understand; keep on seeing, but do not perceive.’ Make the heart of this people dull, and their ears heavy, and blind their eyes; lest they see with their eyes, and hear with their ears, and understand with their hearts, and turn and be healed.” This one does not have a main idea at the center, rather, by looking at "turn and be healed" and the fact that the reverse parallelism is showing opposites, we get that the opposite of "turn and be healed" is "hearing without understanding, seeing without perceiving".
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Date: 3/17/2022 8:22:00 PM
Interesting concept, Jeff, thanks for pointing this out, I have noticed parallelisms in the Bible, especially Psalms, but this is new to me:)
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Date: 3/16/2022 8:10:00 PM
Thanks so much for this info... enlightening as well as to me, faith-edifying, since you have used the Scriptures to prop and anchor your clearly-elucidated article on "chiasmus." God bless you.
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Date: 3/17/2022 9:24:00 AM
Thanks, Beata, it turns out they are everywhere in Scripture!
Date: 3/16/2022 9:43:00 AM
Oh wow! I've never heard of this before! How interesting. In principle, it's similar to the way an oxymoron works where two opposites are put together for example _ " it was pretty ugly " Thank you for sharing this amazing fact. There's a saying, " You learn something new everyday! " And how true that is.
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Date: 3/16/2022 12:32:00 PM
There are lots of good ones: never let a fool kiss you, or a kiss fool you! Thanks for adding to the conversation, Natasha!
Date: 3/16/2022 7:53:00 AM
Jeff, I find this subject fascinating, and, as I noted in my comment on your poem, it bares considerable similarity to what I have called Verso-Rhyme. In going back through my poems, I find that I have used the Verso-Rhyme concept innumerable times, often without realizing I was doing it. So, it comes somewhat naturally for me. Fine article for our consideration.
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Date: 3/16/2022 6:02:00 PM
Oh, wow, that's really neat!
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Date: 3/16/2022 2:05:00 PM
Yes. I believe I may have gone to school with Kenneth Bailey. We are also the same age; well, I think he might have been a year older than me. Brilliant mind!
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Date: 3/16/2022 8:04:00 AM
Kenneth Bailey wrote a book entitled, "Paul through Mediterranean Eyes", in which he explores the chiasmus and its use in Paul's first letter to the Corinthians. It is right under our noses, over and over, nearly the entire letter is constructed using them, but you don't see them in standard prose. It is a very interesting read. He has another volume on the same in Luke's gospel.

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