Our Lady of Guadalupe

our lady of Guadalupe stands alight in corner air
her gown emerald, cerise, gold
Don Pedro stands afore
glass to glass in an amber glow
Lowry’s beaked bird of uva descent
shadows flicker here, there
on the morrow lies the tropical carnage
the insect floor, the frogs call all night
offshore the everlasting beacon of an occultist light
humanities illusion of delusion, forevermore
calling ships to a harbor where i have none
the rain praters, the storm roars, the poet walks the floor
she stirs, i am not there, panther pillow rising
Morrison's Spanish caravans
once more the earth pulls as Don Pedro and i kneel
the carnal carnival between her naps
is when my desk finds the lines
while waiting for the sun

   Abilene   6/18

“How, unless you drink as I do, could you hope to understand the beauty of an old Indian woman playing dominoes with a chicken?”
? Malcolm Lowry, Under the Volcano
for those of you who have attended an Arts and Madness conference know the story. Edna St. Vincent Millay, master of the sonnet, the rage of her age now collects dust in the library and no longer studied at the university. her life of addiction and the cost in the wake of self-induced destruction surrounding her. the stupor of Elizabeth Bishop cost her the chance of a happy marriage. i could go on but what is important to me is that 28 years ago i walked away from the madness and kept the art.

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Date: 6/9/2022 2:53:00 PM
Timothy I applaud this wonderful creation of yours. It reflects yours and the readers interpretation of your experience and combined stories of Malcom Lowry, Edna St Vincent Millay. Your reference to Don Pedro, and the Indian woman playing dominoes with a chicken is spectecular to create the readers perception in contrast to the writing. I really love your choice of words, I am surprised this didnt make POTD. You have cleverly written a unique work of magnitude. Congratulations...
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Date: 6/10/2022 3:18:00 PM
thank you, Michael...Lowry is a sad read about his alcoholism...i still but those candles and Don Pedro who Mary appeared to was one i could not get by, my favorite brandy...what is gratifying is see then and grateful for the here and now and how rich is my life walking away from alcohol...to me there is no greater award
Date: 6/9/2022 6:03:00 AM
my favorites the candle of Our Lady of Guadelupe beaked bird of uva descent is Don Pedro's brandy long ago i was told a good poet scours the room before writing the theory, inductive thinking is superior to the hasty deductive rush to theory
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Date: 6/9/2022 5:53:00 AM
Great imagery, Timothy! Description of the gown, the glow, the shadow, the storm and poet.
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Date: 6/9/2022 6:05:00 AM
thank you....quite the eye you have
Date: 6/9/2022 2:22:00 AM
The spirits definitely loosen our inhibitions, free our own programs to be broadcast, usually deep into the night. This is a marvel Timothy. Blessings
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Date: 6/9/2022 5:55:00 AM
thank you Connie...one of the great aspects of being a poet we are privy not only to a look at humanity but changes in ourselves...a lot of thankfulness in this one and the 28 years of sobriety it grew into...as mom always said, paradise is between the ears, and that is your job not the worlds
Date: 6/8/2022 8:10:00 PM
Your lines are so well crafted that the whole poem took me to a different land. Loved every inch of it!!
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Date: 6/9/2022 5:57:00 AM
thank you...it was a different land, an ex-patriot in Mexico living on the beach in a hotel with others who were in the arts
Date: 6/8/2022 5:19:00 PM
You are a profound writer, Timothy. This is amazing poetry!
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Date: 6/8/2022 7:08:00 PM
why thank you Andrea....and i adore your quill, blessings upon you and yours
Date: 6/8/2022 2:52:00 PM
I have read some of Edna St. Vincent Millay. I enjoyed reading many of her sonnets. It is sad that they are no longer read but I guess some of them could not be understood in this modern age. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/8/2022 7:09:00 PM
have you seen "Savage Beauty"? it is on Netflix
Date: 6/8/2022 9:20:00 AM
I so love her history in fact Mother Mary is one of my favorite Mother image, did you know that she appeared in Italy over the mountains they called her Our Lady Of The Snow. I have a story to go with that.
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Date: 6/8/2022 1:49:00 PM
yes, i do know of her appearances...i am often called to pray for others, sometimes i go to the Lourdes gift shop and send a little bottle of water with the children kneeling before her on the bottle to special requests...i have one on my desk as a reminder to pray for those special requests...in the stations of the cross number nine holds me longest...a mother and her son is a story too often overlooked...
Date: 6/8/2022 6:54:00 AM
So these are musings over some paintings from the art show? I'm not very good at following, but I like this very much, whatever the source.
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Date: 6/8/2022 1:59:00 PM
Arts and Madness conferences deal with the Mental Illnesses that are so common among those in the arts which include writers, poets, sculptors, and artists...Google that for a different conference, the poem is about drinking and writing while i was in Mexico for a few years in a more or less art orientated community, see my poem "we poets are waiting for the moonset"..the conferences are mostly literary scholars
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