There Is No Try
This one’s Burmese
done with ease if
one sees patterns
or he learns to.
Uh, there is no try; ya do.
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A YaDu:
O. O. O. a.
O. O. a. O
O. a. O. b
O. O. b. c.
O. O. O. O. O. O. O. O. c.
(The last line can be 5, 7, 9, or 11 syllables)
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