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For the 'Space Between Stars' contest sponsored by Di11y Da11y

The Space Between Stars

The space between stars is not empty
though JLo and Ben’s might be dead.
It seems that they can’t sell their mansion,
‘cuz who wants an unlucky bed?

The kids wish the stars kept their distance
like diddling P. Diddy, right?
But they’d offer little resistance
if stars got assaulted at night. 

The space between stars is not empty,
but the distance, exceedingly great.
There’s pervy and curvy b-listers,
but not many good ones of late.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Anaya Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Laughs! I like your take on the contest! Hollywood's Star's.
Kyser Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Thanks, had fun with it!
Leiser Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 8:07 PM
Your creative poetic write is incredibly witty, Jeff! I love the subtle humor throughout..well done!
Kyser Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Thanks, Laura - probably not what Dilly Dally had in mind, but it triggered a fun write!
Gayagay Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Well-crafted poem. Witty.
Kyser Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 4:37 AM
Thanks, Ryan! Have a great day!
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