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For the 'Space Between Stars' contest sponsored by Di11y Da11y

The space between stars is not empty though JLo and Ben’s might be dead. It seems that they can’t sell their mansion, ‘cuz who wants an unlucky bed? The kids wish the stars kept their distance like diddling P. Diddy, right? But they’d offer little resistance if stars got assaulted at night. The space between stars is not empty, but the distance, exceedingly great. There’s pervy and curvy b-listers, but not many good ones of late. ----------

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Date: 10/26/2024 10:52:00 AM
Laughs! I like your take on the contest! Hollywood's Star's.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/26/2024 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, had fun with it!
Date: 10/23/2024 8:07:00 PM
Your creative poetic write is incredibly witty, Jeff! I love the subtle humor throughout..well done!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/24/2024 4:36:00 AM
Thanks, Laura - probably not what Dilly Dally had in mind, but it triggered a fun write!
Date: 10/23/2024 4:38:00 PM
Well-crafted poem. Witty.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/24/2024 4:37:00 AM
Thanks, Ryan! Have a great day!

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