Into The Void Premiere Contest Winner

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For the Addressing the World with your Gift poetry contest sponsored by Janis Medders Tobechi

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A bright star being birthed in cyberspace,
or supernova fading out of view…
A proud creator notes its proper place
atop a list of things wondrous and new.

The world collective holds its breath and waits,
expansion of the universe on hold.
For cruel is a life controlled by fates
compassionless, unfeeling, deathly cold.

By chance, will an observer see its spark,
inspect its hyperlink, pursuing more?
Or will it slide in shameful downward arc,
a soundless note within an endless score?

Into the void with screams of silent rage,
an unread verse descends New Poems page.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 12/19/2024 11:25:00 PM
very beautiful poem!Congratulations on your win!Have a great day
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Date: 11/30/2024 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/29/2024 2:56:00 PM
Into the Void (Glenn Hughes)… https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=AVObgikw3iM&pp=ygUaZ2xlbm4gaHVnaGVzIGludG8gdGhlIHZvaWQ%3D sorry for spamming your comments but we all love Glenn Hughes. I enjoyed reading your poem. It was really good. Congrats on the win!!!
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Date: 11/29/2024 2:38:00 PM
VERY WELL WRITTEN SONNET. Especially liked the "screams of silent rage.: Congratulations on your trophy win. Blessings of favor. Janis
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/29/2024 3:38:00 PM
Thanks so much for hosting the contest Janis!
Date: 11/29/2024 1:53:00 PM
Nice win Jeff
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