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for the Sapphic Stanzas contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

Invasion

Paratroopers stealthily slide unnoticed,
chutes deployed, small blazes of white obscured by
fog that lingers lazily, til their numbers
    cover the meadow…

Faster, faster, not just content to cover,
reinforcements filling in, words unspoken,
synchronized with perfect precision, ever
    picking up tempo…

Occupation utterly overwhelming,
swamped defenses, raising a flag, surrender.
Long, the arm of conquering winter, brings a
    lengthening shadow…
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Kauffman Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Jeff, congratulations on your win with this masterful metaphoric poem depicting snowflakes as paratroopers! Very creative! Sending you all the blessings of the Christmas season.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 8:43 PM
Back with congrats!
mysore Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 8:00 PM
I felt a rush to read it once again! congratulations on your winning write dear poet. So well presented thoughts I say. Cheers!!!
Poteet Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 8:17 AM
Perfect in form and unique as well as creative in application to winter's prompt. Snow storm compared to a military invasion. Definitely poetic and worthy of recognition. Thanks for sharing, Jeff.
Kyser Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Thanks for stopping by!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2024 at 4:33 PM
Great imagery of Winter coming in…the invasion.
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