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Rising of the red dragon, roaring loud clap of thunder, wings spread from a trap dungeon, on top a summit underground well. An old English Falcon knight, the bells summon, as the priest runs out shouting in sheer fright, a demon has invaded the church. The Falcon knight rows his boat out an overlooked distant island in search for seventh son, of the seventh son's assistance. A seer and restorer of life, son of a white witch. Gold coins for the Lettermore, the seventh son, his new apprentice. A stone talisman around his neck he wears for safety. Stone stolen from the unbound red dragon's veiled abbey gold coffers. Ominous blood crescent moon, amidst overhanging clouds, shamed by the red dragon's wrath, and the overturning darken runes. The Lettermore and last of noble Falcon knights that's left, arm themselves, and journey off upon their hunt and difficult quest. Early morning and mountains of green, leaves flutter and dance, with clear limpid flowing streams. Horses trot in rhythm, caught in a trance, in search of the dragon queen. She finds her doom in the hands of noble knight shrew, unseen knife, in her transformed feminine skin. 2/28/2022 Lind30nr Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 7779 unrhyme, using How Many Syllables Counter inspired by the movie "Seventh Son"

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Date: 3/28/2022 1:31:00 AM
Good story and some wonderful description. Thank you, Eve.
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Date: 3/18/2022 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this magical story inspired by Arthurian theme. This form truly matched with the magnificent style of storytelling. Brilliantly done! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 3/18/2022 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning entry in the contest. A magical tale reminiscent of King Arthur days! Well done. :)Paulette
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Date: 3/17/2022 11:13:00 AM
Very enlightening fantasy, Eve. You have caught the magic of the movie so well. Quite detailed - I applaud your first place win, well-eserved.
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:59:00 AM
Okay, I will not ever look at the lind30 as some kind of extended haiku again. That worked beautifully as a story-telling form. Thanks, that's terrific!
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:33:00 AM
WOW Eve, this is a magnificent entry so deserving of your trophy win! Congratulations my friend. Happy St. Patrick’s Day. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/17/2022 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations Eve! I always love your "Arthurian" themed poems. Really nicely done. Blessings and all the best.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/17/2022 9:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, you know what I watch ..
Date: 3/17/2022 8:28:00 AM
A truly great work. Congratulations!
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/17/2022 9:46:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj, for the congratulations. Blessings to you and yours
Date: 3/17/2022 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve, on your first place win with this tour de force! Very enjoyable.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/17/2022 9:47:00 AM
Yeah! I finally made first place. Thank you, Milt, for the congratulations. Blessings to you and yours
Date: 3/8/2022 8:04:00 PM
This is an amazing write, prolific and outlandish. Congratulations on your great win Jeff !
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/17/2022 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa, for the inspirational compliment and for the congratulations. Blessings to you and yours
Date: 3/5/2022 1:14:00 PM
Quite a production of verse. Wow. Best wishes
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/17/2022 2:38:00 PM
Are you ever going to unblock me, Pangie? Haven't I been in the doghouse long enough?
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/17/2022 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota, for the congratulations. Blessings to you my friend
Date: 3/3/2022 7:32:00 PM
Well, Eve, that killed going to see the movie, But, hey, all the imagery is there, I could see and feel it all, lovely fantasy poem . . . : )
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/17/2022 9:49:00 AM
Sorry :) couldn't help myself ... I love this type of movies
Date: 3/3/2022 10:36:00 AM
This seems fantastical for a fantasy about a dragon!
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/17/2022 9:50:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. You see what I truly enjoy.
Date: 2/28/2022 10:45:00 AM
I haven't seen the movie, but anything is possible in the land of the Red Dragon (Wales)! Aloha!
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