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Blog Posted:2/23/2016 5:15:00 AM

All She Wrote

Laying on the pillow
where she used to rest her head.
Somehow I knew I'd hate to hear...
that single word I read.

No reason for the leaving
as far as I could see.
No long goodbyes or letters,
just one word left for me.

Not a single explanation
not a sign left as to why.
I can't understand it
no matter how I try.

She wasn't even angry
her heart not filled with sorrow.
Not one time did she mention
that she'd be gone tomorrow.

I can see it there across the room
in the soft pale moonlights glow.
A little piece of paper
with everything I need to know.

I've been reading it for hours
I can't make it sink in.
What I read a hundred times
I need to read again.

Right there on her pillow
on a yellow Post It note.
She never even said I'm sorry,
goodbye was all she wrote.

Edwin C Hofert, poet and author



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Date: 2/25/2016 4:03:00 AM
thats great nicked it for a poetry night i go to read out
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/25/2016 4:23:00 PM
I will certainly let Edwin know...he will be happy that you stopped to comment. Cheers!
Date: 2/24/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thanks for showcasing Edwin's wonderful words ... I hope he is back on soup again soon:-) hugs jan xx
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/25/2016 9:02:00 AM
Yes...I just sent up SMOKE SIGNALS (my oven caught on fire) for him to put his tear jerking poetry down and show up!
Date: 2/23/2016 8:59:00 PM
Thanks for sharing Judy. This is so sad and heartfelt. I hope you are safe with all those Tornadoes running rampant. Stay safe.
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/24/2016 5:31:00 AM
Thanks Michael, it's really been one helluva storm! So very many homes Gone...literally....With the Wind....
Date: 2/23/2016 6:34:00 PM
Judy you have very good taste and that is one fine poem! :)
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/24/2016 5:29:00 AM
Thank You Arthur...I'm off to find Edwin the Mystery Man....thanks again for stopping...
Date: 2/23/2016 3:43:00 PM
Sad one and I enjoyed it, Judy!
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/24/2016 5:28:00 AM
Hellooooooooooooo Andrea!
Date: 2/23/2016 1:42:00 PM
Very sad.... I definitely hope it never happens to me...
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/24/2016 5:27:00 AM
Indeed Not! We'd have to get the guy a lobotomy if he left you!
Date: 2/23/2016 10:50:00 AM
Love this poem. Goodbyes are always sad,especially when we don't see them coming..Heartwrenching yet so beautiful.Thanks for sharing Judy.
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/24/2016 5:32:00 AM
Thanks for your visit....appreciate it...
Date: 2/23/2016 10:43:00 AM
:-) some people just don't have much to say their actions says it all. Gooood ! I had read this along time ago.
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/24/2016 6:50:00 AM
Hi Eve....good to hear from you...and if I've said this before...I meant it Twice! Cheers!
Date: 2/23/2016 8:09:00 AM
It's wonderful just the way it is. I don't know why some people are always suggesting changes to the words, or add something to what a person has penned. Thank you for sharing Edwin's lamenting poem, Judy.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/23/2016 5:37:00 PM
I'm honky dory, Mr. O.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/23/2016 4:41:00 PM
This is for you, Ruben: DD!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/23/2016 4:35:00 PM
That's also incorrect. It's Ms. Lane.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/23/2016 12:05:00 PM
Since you posted this under my comment TO JUDY...I will reply by saying that you conclude incorrectly. But now that you attack my character, I will not ignore the fact that you think I take a 'backstabbing approach," and I will tell you that I find you rude and your remarks against my character to be insulting. That should be direct enough for you. I am a mild mannered and humble person, Mr. Jerden, and in order for me to remain so, I wish no further contact with you. If you pursue any of the points you take issue with, then you have far too much time on your hands.
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/23/2016 11:49:00 AM
Seeing this comment posted immediately after mine, I can only conclude that "some people" refers to me. Apparently you lack the character to address me directly, preferring the backstabbing approach. If it's not me, I apologize, but I find the coincidence too apparent. BTW, I liked the poem. I really do think it would be a good country song, the kind I like. I was not being facetious.
Date: 2/23/2016 6:05:00 AM
All it needs is a refrain to make a good country song. I would re-title it Clueless...
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/23/2016 7:41:00 PM
Good luck with the nasty weather! Hope it blows over soon!
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/23/2016 7:39:00 PM
My title suggestion, Clueless, refers to the fact that men often don't see it coming, although there may have been many hints and signs.
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Roy Jerden
Date: 2/23/2016 7:36:00 PM
Ernest Tubb had a hit song in the 40's called 'That's All She Wrote'. It referred to the Dear John letters soldiers got, one story being that the letter consisted of only "Dear John". That's all she wrote.
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/23/2016 7:26:00 PM
Thanks again Roy...I told Edwin what you said...he was thrilled...meanwhile we are in the midst of tornadoes. My daughters girlfriend just lost her house...I mean it's gone....whew..they told us to get inside closets but think I'll just wait and listen for a train like sound...again...thanks...
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/23/2016 6:22:00 AM
Sounds good...Edwin will show up here ...sooner or later...and I'm sure he'll read your suggestion...Thanks for stopping...

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