Judy Konos Poet Acrostic

Lovely Lovelier Loveliest

Lovely is the name he bequeathed her 
on occasion he could recall when they met
variable soft silkens rest upon her breast      
even her lips pursued his inner mindset 
like every young man consumed in fascination 
insecure,  doubtful, hesitant and now totally finished 
even before he could begin to approach his lovely
sullen was his smile, "Would you care to dance?"
together the silkens now lay upon his lips 



2/15/16

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Timothy Hicks February 26, 2016 at 1:54 AM Were you describing the state of the lady, with your title? or the escalating feeling the reader would have going down through these lines? "together the silkens now lay upon his lips" ... perhaps that's when it became ... Loveliest. Judy Konos February 26, 2016 at 4:53 AM Thank you for commenting...appreciate your views... Timothy Hicks February 26, 2016 at 1:54 AM I actually didn't realize this was an acrostic until reading the comments ... an extra bonus, then.

Emile Pinet February 17, 2016 at 12:36 PM The setting and the mood of this poem lends itself well to the subject matter of young love. Emile.

Lin Lane February 15, 2016 at 5:05 PM Well that's quite lovely in itself, Judy. Judy Konos February 15, 2016 at 7:51 PM Hey Lin, too bad it's not loveliness like the contest..so now I'll call it lovelymess!