Judy Konos Poet Lyric

Fourth Dimension

Anacreontic Verse

Forgotten
love has faded
forever now lost
in the lips of ice
What once was
is no more
Her body revolts
she heaves heavily
Get thee away 
Deliver me Lord
back to sanity
Let her feel my eyes
let her see my needs
a soft bed for two
now scorned by my touch 
Let me give my might 
pray show me the way
I will not lose her
I cannot go on
My life is over 


11/13/15

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Paul Callus November 21, 2015 at 4:31 AM Love scorned is painful and hard to bear! But time heals...love does not grow on one stem only...a new one might already be awaiting to bloom:) Congrats on a much deserved win, Judy! ~ Regards // paul Judy Konos November 21, 2015 at 5:03 AM Thank you ...

Kim Merryman November 20, 2015 at 9:34 PM Desperation shines through. Great write, Judy! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Judy Konos November 21, 2015 at 5:05 AM Thank you Kim.....

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2015 at 3:25 PM Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara Judy Konos November 20, 2015 at 4:03 PM Thank you Sara.....and I must say that is one dumb guy in that photo....whew....some of them can't take a hint! LOL

Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 5:37 PM I found the image and imagery so sad Judy - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Judy Konos November 19, 2015 at 6:04 PM sadness overcomes us when our syllables are limited! LOL

James Inman November 19, 2015 at 8:44 AM Interesting write, Judy. I feel the meaning is deeper than the words on the page , but I'm not quite grasping it. James Inman November 19, 2015 at 12:43 PM HaHa, already too many times, I'm afraid. Judy Konos November 19, 2015 at 9:32 AM She doesn't want his love.....likely you don't grasp it because that could never happen to you! Cheers!

Balveen Cheema November 19, 2015 at 7:38 AM A turmoil many suffer from! Congrats Judy! Judy Konos November 19, 2015 at 6:06 PM Thanks for visiting...appreciate it

Nette Onclaud November 19, 2015 at 2:33 AM wow, a fierce write, judy..super congrats and huggs Judy Konos November 19, 2015 at 6:08 PM Thank you Nette....limited syllables make one fierce! LOL

Skat A November 18, 2015 at 8:13 PM Judy, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT** Judy Konos November 19, 2015 at 6:09 PM Skat.....there ya are...whoopee

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 18, 2015 at 7:46 PM Congratulations Judy Judy Konos November 19, 2015 at 6:10 PM Hello Nayda....thanks for visiting and your name is delightful...

Edward Ebbs November 18, 2015 at 6:45 PM I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating! Judy Konos November 19, 2015 at 6:10 PM And thank you Edward for a unique and interesting contest....

Skat A November 14, 2015 at 8:34 AM this is good. SKAT Judy Konos November 14, 2015 at 9:30 AM Listen to you another Queen of poetry.....thanks...

CayCay Godwin November 13, 2015 at 11:37 AM It matters not, Lin and Tim - we don't get to choose. Plus, in life, broken hearts may well heal given enough time, but one doesn't 'heal' after death! Sorry, Judy - it is your page I am being social on! Well, that's because I wanted you to know that I enjoyed your write and then they (down there) distracted me. It is their fault! Very good ... CayCay Tim Smith November 13, 2015 at 2:16 PM True CayCay....I would choose life over anything and, as you can tell, never have experienced death. Sorry for being a distraction : )...btw....new love helps heal a broken heart Lin Lane November 13, 2015 at 1:50 PM lol CayCay..slap my hands... I'm guilty as charged. and yes, Judy...the best food! Judy Konos November 13, 2015 at 1:45 PM No regrets! ...be social as much as you like.....thanks for visiting

Lin Lane November 13, 2015 at 11:29 AM Sometimes a broken heart is more painful then death...or seems so. Tim thinks so. Nice one, Judy.. LA lady...me, too. Judy Konos November 13, 2015 at 1:47 PM Louisiana Lin.....we are home to the best food ever.....

Tim Smith November 13, 2015 at 11:00 AM Death seems like a better option than a broken heart...lovey Judy Judy Konos November 13, 2015 at 1:48 PM sometimes things are not always as they seem....but coming from a good looking guy....I wouldn't worry about it...thanks for coming over ....appreciate it......