Terra Firma

sunset mocks rice fields
    soil embraced by widow weeds
        life source diminished
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Congrats Judy. So versed with your art.
Konos Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Thanks late getting back to you. Thanks again!
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:41 PM
yours is very deep and I like it a lot, Judy. Congrats for your win.
Konos Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Hey dere favorite poet!
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Back with congratulations, Judy; well deserved. ~ Regards // paul
Konos Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Paul....appreciate your visit
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 9:48 AM
And a good morning to you.... hugs.... Linda
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Hollywood doesn't want a duff ball like me
Konos Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Hey I was looking at your photos...Girl you're so damn beautiful you need to get off this cooking aisle and go to Hollywood while the 'gettins' good......Cheers!
Haight Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Great Haiku, Judy. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Konos Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thank you Sandra....appreciate your compliment much
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:10 AM
Judy, Congrats on your "Haiku 101" win. LINDA
Konos Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 3:12 AM
Many thanks.....again.....kiddo.....
Gentry Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 11:50 PM
Awesome haiku! Congratulations on your win.
Konos Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 3:13 AM
Hey Susan! I thank you.....much
D. Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:07 PM
nice
Konos Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 3:13 AM
Thanks Nathan appreciate it...
Callus Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Top marks for this lovely and clever haiku, Judy! Both of us tackled this picture with totally different ideas...yet we still managed to get something in common....'life':) // paul
Konos Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:13 AM
Thank you ... life...that's all we have until we don't...again thanks
A  Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:59 PM
The best of luck in the search of nature. 101 haiku contest. Nate will enjoy this one. SKAT
Konos Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:20 PM
Hey Boot SKAT I just finishing saying, 'Sure is quiet here today' so thanks for stopping....
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:08 PM
very very interesting one. You really thought about this one!!
Konos Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:31 PM
You do me proud!
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 2:20 PM
truly iaginative!...superb 'ku, judy!..huggs
Konos Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Thank you for just being Nette on Cloud 9
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Oh Judy I do like your take on the theme the imagery compliments the image perfectly - I hope this places really well for you:-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Thank You ...appreciate your stopping....
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