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Along the Way

Somewhere along the way I got lost in yesterday In a room where music played the same where we once stayed Our touch demure. . . forbidden two lives cramped and hidden so many feel this way so lost in yesterday... 1/21/16

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Date: 1/25/2016 11:13:00 AM
Beautifully woven words as well prepared seeds for a perfect germination on any reading mind. An awesome 7 dearest poet
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Judy Konos
Date: 1/25/2016 12:35:00 PM
Well thank you very much....good to see you.....
Date: 1/21/2016 3:36:00 PM
I love this Judy. A true favorite and 7
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/21/2016 3:45:00 PM
Yes I was there ....read my limerick reply to him on his post
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Judy Konos
Date: 1/21/2016 3:44:00 PM
Tim Jack has surrendered his King Title to you! Don't let him do it! Go check his 3 poems today raise a fuss!
Date: 1/21/2016 1:46:00 PM
This is beautiful, Judy! I think I've been in such a situation myself...// paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2016 3:07:00 PM
:) :)
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Judy Konos
Date: 1/21/2016 2:32:00 PM
Likely. Once I dreamed I was in an art gallery staring at a gorgeous rendering when I was immediately jolted and awoke only to faintly remember that this once thing of beauty looked no more than like a thin sliced cabbage, void of color. I suppose the mind plays tricks..or dreams do....take care thanks for stopping....

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