Rain

Rain lends an opportunity to hide  
A moisture that flows within the eyes 
Instant illusion that never was 
No longer we love somehow despise 



10/26/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lawless Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Nicely written Judy. Crying into the rain...
Negron Flores Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations Judy.
A  Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 1:19 PM
Judy, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
A. Sharma Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Very wonderful write Judy.. congrats on great win!
Pettit Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 5:02 PM
A short but sweet acrostic poem. I'm glad to be back.
Konos Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Glad that you are back. You have been sorely missed....
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 4:05 PM
very well done, dear Judy!!
Konos Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Ah Andreaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa good to see you....
Konos Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 4:34 PM
thank you Andrea...for so long I have wanted to say it sucks...so now I have said it...and I feel better! LOL...So Thanks...
Roper Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 3:13 PM
wonderful poem! good luck in the contest.. How are things going?
Konos Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 3:15 PM
hanging in there...thanks for stopping....
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Drop by and visit any time. Your visits are always appreciated.
Konos Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Be careful what you wish for!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Or rain might create the illusion of tears thus making us see something that isn't there. I enjoyed both your picture and poem.
Konos Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Hello Richard....Long time no see saw....
Wigley Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Slightly sorrowful, but soothing. Lovely piece, Judy, good luck in the contest. Viv x
Konos Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 8:36 AM
It bees Viv.......thanks for stopping....
Pinet Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 6:08 PM
Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. The poem has a message and delivers it well. Emile.
Konos Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Thanks....
La France Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Judy, your poem is so soothing, I adore the sound of the rain, I love it 7 ~
Konos Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 8:45 AM
thank you ...I feel the exact same...
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