Jack Frost

Jealous winter covers the fall leaves below All the Elm trees frozen fast beneath snow Calmly Jack presses his nose on the pane Keeping composure Jack shall remain sane Forever frozen are his tears bound within Remembering the winter they lived in sin If only her heart melted like snow Shutting out winter she'd suddenly know Two hearts freed from the ice below

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Tim Smith

Date: 11/30/2015 7:03:00 PM

Like how you turned this into romance...love it Judy

Judy Konos
Date: 11/30/2015 7:09:00 PM

Sounds like a cold romance and none too interesting! LOL

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/30/2015 12:43:00 PM

oh he is nipping into the bones these days judy truly excellent pen wishing you a blessed week

Judy Konos
Date: 11/30/2015 12:49:00 PM

thank you once again.....and remember stay warm!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2015 11:31:00 AM

love the personification Judy and a great acrostic too - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2015 12:55:00 PM

oh oh oh I've only brought one present and its not time to put the tree up - cold cold cold cold here brrrrr and wet :-( hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos
Date: 11/30/2015 12:51:00 PM

Hello Jan....How is that UK weather? must be brrrrrr long about now. We are 75 but that is soon to be short lived...put Christmas Tree up today....and wrapped some presents....ho ho ho ...be here before we know it....

Kevin Leake

Date: 11/30/2015 7:15:00 AM

Lovely Judy, I really think this contest is going to be so hard to judge, I've read so many good ones now and this is just one more to add!!! Great poetry Best Wishes Kevin

Judy Konos
Date: 11/30/2015 7:56:00 AM

well thanks Kevin....and don't let Jack Frost nip your toes...that's a big OUCH......

Lin Lane

Date: 11/30/2015 6:20:00 AM

Very nice, Judy.

Judy Konos
Date: 11/30/2015 6:28:00 AM

Happy Monday....stay warm.....