Favorite Flower

Daffodils of gold wind their way through heaven's green pastures 
As angels whisper through the meadows of my mind 
Fragrance forgotten through the passing years 
Forever dormant, lingers in sphere of time  
Ominously transparent in the shells of life
Done now are things I cannot change   
If only I could return the fragrance that I stole
Letting you know that I seek forgiveness
Soon all seasons would shower daffodils
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 8:16 PM
wow, I love how you did this. I never got to see it earlier and now I can see it was in that contest judged a while back. Big congrats. I hope it scored high. So clever to do it as acrostic.
Konos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 7:18 AM
Hello Andrea....you're blowing it out of the water with your latest winning writes....so thank you very much for being here, Oh great warrior....
Roper Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Judy, congratulations on your “Favorite Flower" win a 7 ! :)
Konos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Eve...as they say in New Orleans, "You Da Best!"
A  Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Judy, Congratulations on your "Favorite Flower win." SKAT
Konos Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 1:20 PM
thank you boot SKAT n boogie....appreciate you as always....
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Judy:-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:12 PM
what happened????????????? time to look.....
Negron Flores Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 2:20 PM
Congratulations
Konos Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:12 PM
will have to go look...unaware...but thank you
La France Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Judy, I am back reading this beauty again, and I want to thank you so much for your awesome contest and for my placement within ~
Konos Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Thank you nothing broken about your wings....and I enjoy your poem...has such depth....that takes talent...and you've got it kid..
Onclaud Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 1:57 AM
how engaging are you words, delicate and as pretty as the daffodils, judy.. love this side of you!..huggs!
Konos Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Love all your sides....thanks for stopping....busy girl
Ward Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 2:10 AM
Judy, I am awarding your poem a 7 for its emotional quality and also for its clarity. GL in the contest. Julia, xx
Konos Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Thank You Julia...appreciate it and again...glad you joined....
La France Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Judy, I LOVE your flower poem and I want to thank you so much for my first place in your contest, so appreciated
Konos Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 8:30 PM
you are most welcome....you always write a first place...YOU GO GIRL!
A  Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 2:31 PM
good luck... :) SKAT
Konos Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 2:47 PM
LOL still alive...nuff said!
Cheema Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 7:13 AM
This is lovely Judy!
Konos Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 8:27 AM
I do thank you Balveen....
Smith Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 4:49 PM
This is lovely Judy. Daffodils are beautiful flowers.
Konos Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:26 PM
Agree. Once had 13 acres of them...smelled heavenly...and all around the fence of those acres...grew wisteria...so heavenly...
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 3:44 PM
a wonderful acrostic with lovely imagery and an ethereal quality to it Judy:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Konos Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 5:29 PM
Hey Girl....yep...acrostic...lol...thanks
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