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I retired from a nursing career to live a simple life in the country and write. I self
published my first book of poetry, The River of Liquid Dreams. Small presses published two more, In The Presence of Shadows, and Faith Like A Dandelion. I had the honor of having one of my poems recited in a documentary produced by the Canadian Institute on Child Health, The Healing Journey. I give poetry readings and judge performance poetry competitions.

                                   Monterey Sirak        



 




POSTAGE STILL DUE

Blog Posted:6/1/2013 6:45:00 AM
A writer is a dandelion, constantly growing, evolving, blowing words -pieces of themselves- into the wind like dandelion fluff, then starting over.

I only recently joined Poetry Soup and discovered a multitude of talented poets and contests that inspire me to grow and blow my fluff in new directions.

I started a new series of poetry written in prose form. These are short conversations, moments in time, that will fit on a postcard. Originally I was thinking 'Postcard Poetry', but I now wonder if it is actually 'Postscript Poetry', the words left unsaid at the end of a conversation, when a letter is mailed, when a relationship is severed. The title for the series 'Postage Still Due' was suggested by a poet friend of mine at my local free verse group.

I would appreciate and be so grateful for any and all critiques and comments as I post new entries to this series.

September 1968

To: Dappy (AKA Grandpa)

       Kenmar Road

       Reidland, Kentucky

I hitch the little cart to the pony you gave me.

Ride it up and down the pasture for hours until he tires.

Then I sit on the steps to wait for your battered black pickup truck

to come rumbling up the drive. Mom and Dad watch me with sad eyes.

They said heaven is too far away for you to visit. I don’t know about that.

Sometimes, just sometimes, I still feel your hug.





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Date: 6/3/2013 12:21:00 AM
This is charming, loved it .....Seren
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 6/5/2013 12:45:00 PM
Oh, thank you
Date: 6/2/2013 7:27:00 PM
If you're afraid of spiders then can you read my "Arachnophobia"? You can tell me more.
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Date: 6/1/2013 12:59:00 PM
So poignant. I love this child's faithful Spirit. So much relayed in just a few lines. I will look forward to reading more of these. SuZ
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 6/2/2013 6:22:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed this. Encouraging writers like you will keep me moving on this new path.
Date: 6/1/2013 7:25:00 AM
I enjoyed your write. I write funny Frou Frou poetry to make you laugh or smile. Try my 'Little Miss Poet and Spider'. I figure we all need some thing to smile about... some times...
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Date: 6/1/2013 8:06:00 AM
I read your poem. Loved it. Made me laugh. I am scared of spiders and have acted that way. I once jumped from a couch to a counter across an open space, while pregnant, to get away from a spider. When I need to smile I'll be going to your poems. Thanks!

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