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- Fog Talk -



                                    The fog
                                    sensed
                                    in a dumb
                                    lament song
                                    The silence
                                    pulsating in the air
                                    Rubbing his back
                                    toward the hill edge

                                    When the colors
                                    disappears quietly
                                    Loses the grip
                                    The anxiety that drills
                                    into the chest
                                    Heavy to move on
                                     - to look in
                                    in its own downfall
                                    ... acknowledge the feeling




                                               15/09/2021
                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 9/17/2021 5:30:00 AM

Nicely captured the scene. Loved the flow. God bless you.
Date: 9/17/2021 4:40:00 AM

There is something quite horrendous being caught in a thick fog. Decades ago I landed in a pea-souper. To this day I do not know how I got home. Totally disoriented.. Great poem...Delice
Date: 9/16/2021 3:35:00 AM

I think its always best to acknowledge the feeling rather then run away from it. You are so wise dear friend, may you have a blessed day, be good :)
Date: 9/15/2021 2:04:00 PM

You captured the melancholy so well, Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/15/2021 12:10:00 PM

Your sense of direction goes haywire and it can be frightening if you're driving. Tom
Date: 9/15/2021 12:07:00 PM

You’ve described this so well, Anne-Lise! Fog always adds a feeling of spookiness to the landscape…
Date: 9/15/2021 11:54:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, your artful poem, as usual, allows the reader to personally absorb, my favorite poetry...I allegorically interpret this myself as sunlit days decrease in duration here in Minnesota, clouds gloom over the horizon (tho it's wonderfully sunny t'day!) l tend to get a bit depressed, (knowing ice & cold are coming) & purposely use tools I've learned to snap out of it, like reaching out to friends, small acts of kindness, acceptance, myself & others... forgiveness, I could go on! james
Date: 9/15/2021 11:30:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, When my husband was alive, We went for a drive quickly the fog came, we did not knw if we were on a road or grassy path. the fog was thick. Hugs.
Date: 9/15/2021 11:05:00 AM

I was in a fog once and I was afraid as I was driving on a high hill. I drove very slowly. You capture the idea of a fog very well.
Date: 9/15/2021 10:56:00 AM

Yes I can feel that fog closing in all round Anne Lise, a wonderful piece of writing, cheers David

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